Please Check Me :-)

[faisalpower]

Hi Guys,
This is our office website I have created this website I also created introduction movie for it by swish 2.0. I am 19 years old, I have not learn in any insiteute HTML,JAVA and Swish i have learn by myself.
So please check it and tell me
Thanks in Advance

http://www.habibco.50g.com

[almark]

I don't like that algerian font, even Areil would be better. The intro uses too many text effects. Just because they exist doesn't mean you have to use them. I suggest you tone it down a little and show more of the equipment.

The colours on the main main look bizarre, but maybe that'sis what you intended. The menu on the left is a little strange. You spell 'welcome' as wellcome twice.

[Cadence]

Well, I'm on a cable modem, and that intro took quite a while to load :( ... So, I'd hate to think how long it took for a Dialup modem ...

Just a suggestion, but I'd put a "Skip Intro" HTML link below the movie, to give people the option ... :)

Peaces,
Cadence

[jbtaylor]

to many java effects

[sol007]

to many pop ups also ..

[bwhittenberger]

I hate going to a retail site and getting pop ups about other companies. I expect them in portals and I avoid sites with multiple pop-ups. Also I agree about the font. It looks a little cheesy. I would show more equipment, after all that appears to be the focus of the site. With a little work you'll have a kick ass intro.

[velez]

Get rid of those javascripts you have on that page! It's a clear indication you're an amateur. I don't recommend this for a business site. You need to tone it down.

Don't get me wrong ... for someone who's just learning you're doing a great job.