intro check please

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here are some eye candy cool text effects i made. tell me what you think, its all AS'ed and only 20k

http://www.manmanworld.com

thanks all!

when i get my site done you could d/l the fla files...

[pheck]

great job >!

i esp like the beginning text fx. here's some more a/s for you to check:

http://board.flashkit.com/board/show...hreadid=357252

[younghistorians]

that's cool. Add some sounds.

[I_am_Tarzan]

Yea, that are some nice effects man. If you dont need the source anymore, throw it to me

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thanks for the input guys, there's sound now but i'm having some sync problems.

[pheck]

yeah, good choice of sound there. javascript or some other object error line 71-ish.

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i'll see what i can do, I'll continue the intro and do some image effects, looks like i'm on the right track. I was inspired by the old intro of http://www.motiongraphiks.com and 8edge.

thank you everyone, i'll post again when i finish it,
deian

[jakesmallman]

How on earth did you get that down to such a small file? Is 93k the whole file or does it stream after that? It did lag a little in places, but I think it was due to the music file probably.

If you could have a look at my site and suggest any ways to cut the download time I would be very pleased.

http://board.flashkit.com/board/show...hreadid=358404

[alty29]

its decent, maybe make the coming soon move a little bit

[enstent]

The file seemed to load well and the sound quality was fair.

good job!

[halodezigns]

Music jumps in the middle, But i'm sure you knew that!

I used that same music (and intro I found here on flash kit) as I'm sure you did too, to win my high school an award at the state fair for best intro:

http://www.HaloDezigns.com/Portfolio/Intros/WHHS1.htm

Check it out!

-Josh

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hey thanks guys, i know the music will be okay soon, hmm no thats the first time i see your intro with the same music i used. just a coincidence or maybe techno is good