my first site

[sfethan]

Hi all, please give me some feedback
on layout and things...
the file size is pretty big,
if you're using 56k,
plesae be patient...
if you're using DSL, it's like 10 - 20 second...
thanx for you're feedback

http://pages.sbcglobal.net/sfethan/ethan_site/

ethan

[flash_critic]

like the navigation, like the colors, feels good..

hate that grey shapetweened box that on press of butttons becomes the page label..that bites..

i would say start over one more time, i know for me, when i was at the point you are at now, only took a couple more re-do's from that point to figure out what flash is really about..your almost there..

couple more re-do's..you can do better..

have fun..

[808i]

Looks cool it's just that the file size is way too huge. Keep messing around with ideas.

Aloha - Marc

http://www.808i.com

[ice337]

Like they said. You have good ideas but the file size is to big. Instead of loading your whole movie at once, try and break it down it to pieces. How you do that is by using the loadMovie command and playing the movies on separate layers.

[slinky2000]

i'm almost there, no chance, ! not on a 56K! , i'll let it load anyway!

blablablabla i'm still waiting,

ah come on , hurry up!

i read somewhere that a viewer sometimes doesnt wait anymorethan 10 - 20 seconds on a webpage to load!, i've lost count on how long i've been waiting!

not bad, but not worth the 1mb download , sorry! ncie allt he same , u've some nice work in ur portfolio, i like it!

just get the size down!

[RedAbode]

It's very nice considering i9t's only your first..
Where did u learn how to do that amazing effect with the guy? where u can only see a part of him as the bar scrolls down..

The file size was no problem (highspeed! haha i didn't have to buy the neibourhood)

I think it could use another draft..

keep uo the amazing work,
Adam Regli

[vinny_dog]

The fake preloader is very jumpy and annoying

[sfethan]

~Hi guys, thanx for your comments,
I'll do my best to revise it...:-)

and about the size, I'm sorry...

the effect:

the guy in the left hand side is my picture,
I used mask to do the effect,
there are two pictures in the same position,
my layer's like this:

mask
picture
mask
picture
mask
picture
picture

so that's it,
just play around and test it, flash is the greatest software on the web~~ enjoys it

ethan