My First Website. All feedback is appreciated. Brutal honesty accepted.

[hollywood]

This is my first web page ever (kinda). I want all the feedback I can get from it. Everyone’s opinion is important to me. I want people to be brutally honest. This is no “ghost” site. I have all the content up. I hope my site is worth your time.

Thanks – Davy

VBP
[Edited by hollywood on 08-07-2002 at 04:41 PM]

[KnownStranger]

-you have flash-... i know i have flash... put -flash plugin detected- or something...

and now... what is the password to enter site ??...

there seems to have some text below the banner... but cant read it, its 'cut'...

[mindtube]

nice!

change the "over state" of the buttons to a brighter color
the fonts are really hard to read (and I love small fonts!)
don't put a "video" button if you don't have any videos to show :-)
pictures are beautiful
lower menu..blue on black is a no-no...or at least make the up state white.


ciao

Paolo

[hollywood]

Thanks for the feedback Paolo. Helps plenty. I'm going to make the buttons bigger on the bottom, and I can't believe I color schemed it that way . The things Action Scripting can do to your head. As for the videos, I had one up and people in some kayaking forums picked up on them. I started getting 500 hits a day with a 14mb video file. I only get 10gigs of bandwidth a month. I lost 9 gigs in 4 days . I can put my vids back up in a month when the hype dies down.

[hollywood]

Originally posted by KnownStranger
-you have flash-... i know i have flash... put -flash plugin detected- or something...

I don't have the brains to do that kind of thing. If you know of any tuts that will help me out let me know. Thanks for your input.

[hollywood]

bump

[Hiperion]

nothing much to say , nice pics nice clean site

greetings
david

[junaidzamir]

Nice and Clean Work.

[vl_aware]

I dotn have anything to rip on its a good site nice pics lots of info


Good job

Great job for a 1st page ever (kinda)

Heh

Catcha Later

[jcmichaels]

For your first page ever (kinda), WOW!

.JC.

[hollywood]

Geez, thanks. Do you think my scrolling navigation could be smoother? Like: http://www.e-fusionstudios.com/. I think its a little too choppy.

[hollywood]

I made some updates. You can now watch one of my movies. Let me know what you think. Thanks.

Please Review My Site

[KnownStranger]

Originally posted by hollywood

Originally posted by KnownStranger
-you have flash-... i know i have flash... put -flash plugin detected- or something...

I don't have the brains to do that kind of thing. If you know of any tuts that will help me out let me know. Thanks for your input.

dont need any tuts... its the WORDS... 'you have flash' look stupid... just use keyboard and type something else...

[KnownStranger]

forget the last post, was refering to 'homepage' since there was no url... but u edited it since... so...

[hollywood]

My misunderstading. I thought you ment I should have something that would detect if they didn't have flash. I need something like that.h

[OdinofAsgard]

I LIKE it

[relandr]

really lke your slide works....but the titles are pretty smallish

<>R<>

[vl_aware]

There are many Flash detections scripts out there If you have MX and you look in the "publish settings" you can detect of any one of the versions out there.

It they work rather well and I have used them on all of the sites that I work on

Hope this helps you out.

Later

Aaron

[barbi]

I don't have anything negative to say on your site. Good job!! Wish I could do that.

Barbi
Admin @ http://www.cutefamilypets.com
Has your pet been featured yet?

[UnderTheSun]

after 400+ post on flashkit and your first post?
you're very careful