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    I've done quite a few micro sites before, and have been using flash for about the last few months (self taught with a lot of help from here!)

    so i'd really like some feed back on a the site below. I'm sure I'm making some stupid mistakes, so I'd really like to know.

    http://www.thinairdesign.co.uk/woodint
    (this is wrk in progress (ive got to get the size down) what you think?)

    http://www.akeler.com/b2s
    (a flash only section of a main site (below) this is the first flash site I published.)

    http://www.akeler.com
    (big html site with flash intro, I used a flash enter button which jumps to a random frame which loads different intro page image)

    thanks to everyone onthis site who have helped me learn this much flash so far... so much more to learn!

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    I only looked at the first for now. Really nice. I like it a lot. You did wonders with the stuff you know... But that's the beauty in flash. Not learning complicated fx, but integrating simple fx to make an awsome look - and you did a great job there. Only bugger I noticed is that the text that fades in when you highlight companies (forgot where it is) kinda distorts the background image for some reason.. it shifts it a little to the side... Not a big deal at all.

    Personally I didn't think the file size was that big at all... Perfectly reasonable for the quality of the site you get...

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    I always been scared of those forests, it's soo quiet in there and you can hide everywhere .... anyway,
    the last link , when you passed the intro the site is like realy slow, but then i mean REALLY slow !!! you should fix that

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    good job.. not bad at all

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    I like the designs. The flash is great!

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    Tip for the alpha fade in of pics on the akeler site

    Only fade them in to 99% not 100%, then you will note that they dont 'jump' at the end





    Thread check please
    http://board.flashkit.com/board/show...hreadid=352795

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    Sweet!

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