my first ever crit here

[jamiepoulton]

I've done quite a few micro sites before, and have been using flash for about the last few months (self taught with a lot of help from here!)

so i'd really like some feed back on a the site below. I'm sure I'm making some stupid mistakes, so I'd really like to know.

http://www.thinairdesign.co.uk/woodint
(this is wrk in progress (ive got to get the size down) what you think?)

http://www.akeler.com/b2s
(a flash only section of a main site (below) this is the first flash site I published.)

http://www.akeler.com
(big html site with flash intro, I used a flash enter button which jumps to a random frame which loads different intro page image)

thanks to everyone onthis site who have helped me learn this much flash so far... so much more to learn!

[I Am Brak]

I only looked at the first for now. Really nice. I like it a lot. You did wonders with the stuff you know... But that's the beauty in flash. Not learning complicated fx, but integrating simple fx to make an awsome look - and you did a great job there. Only bugger I noticed is that the text that fades in when you highlight companies (forgot where it is) kinda distorts the background image for some reason.. it shifts it a little to the side... Not a big deal at all.

Personally I didn't think the file size was that big at all... Perfectly reasonable for the quality of the site you get...

[I_am_Tarzan]

I always been scared of those forests, it's soo quiet in there and you can hide everywhere .... anyway,
the last link , when you passed the intro the site is like realy slow, but then i mean REALLY slow !!! you should fix that

[mikecoutermarsh]

good job.. not bad at all

[younghistorians]

I like the designs. The flash is great!

[Loafboy]

Tip for the alpha fade in of pics on the akeler site

Only fade them in to 99% not 100%, then you will note that they dont 'jump' at the end





Thread check please
http://board.flashkit.com/board/show...hreadid=352795

[Prototype3X]

Sweet!