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Hey all, i'm not quite done w/ my website, but i could use some good constructive criticism. Also, i wanna get rid of the "G-book" section, but i dunno what else to put there. Any suggestions???
http://www.dreamingemotion.com
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oh yeah, Sp1 update caution. This site uses chromeless. I'll fix it later.
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eh?...can't see nothing...
is the site finished already?
or....the hosting company have some problems..
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i just checked it. No problems here... Everything loaded okay.
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Senior Member
Make the chromeless window a bit less wide. The site itself looks great, although at first I thouhgt you were the girl of the site. At least put one picture of you in it somewhere.
The clock had a different font, probably forgot to embed it. And the deactivate-button looks a bit unnecessary. There are several unnecessary things, like the possibility to close the picture of your car, and then relaunch it.
Keeping in mind that the file-size is huge, try to drop some useless stuff, or make a preloader for the different sections.
Great layout and use of pictures though!
cheers
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oh my god, Jolin, fan fan, hahahahaha
you're from Taiwan for damn sure...
well, you really sholdn't hide the enter button,
I couldn't get in last night because
I can't find the enter button, I don't care if you
said I'm stupid but it's important to let the users
know the information clearly, right?...
by the way, the japanese girls on your pages makes me....duh...:P
cheers
ethan
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hidden enter button is the best way to make the users click that X...
this site is supposed to be about YOU... but what we see is pictures of OTHERS... ironic...
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Challenging Convention
Hi Mate,
Firstly, convert the loading data figure into Kb, not bytes, makes it look like there is loads to load to those who dont understand they are bytes (may put people off waiting) (oh, and make the bytes text un-selectable (pet hate)
don't like the button effects on rollover, very newbie, something a little more sublte would suit better..
The pictures are well nice but can't see the relevance (unless they are all your own work)
other than that, good job (and nice car)
(Return the favour? ---> http://board.flashkit.com/board/show...hreadid=372927 )
Cheers,
Andy
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yea i was about to reply and tell you that you look amazing, till i read your bio and saw you were a male.
your site sure makes you seem like a girl.
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Senior Member
hmm the japanese girl was really nice
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Well it is nicely done. This praise is negated by the unbelievably big file size. This is a site that really does need breaking into seperate SWF's. Even so, I am not sure what is causing that huge file size. I wonder how big the bg sound loop is?
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haha..yeah..i thought u are a gal.. i think the web will look better if u put one of ur PS works instead of pics of gals.
A clean n nice design though. ^-^
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Originally posted by theswedishtiger
Well it is nicely done. This praise is negated by the unbelievably big file size. This is a site that really does need breaking into seperate SWF's. Even so, I am not sure what is causing that huge file size. I wonder how big the bg sound loop is?
I'm not sure, the sound loop is really small, and the second sound loop is a separate swf file.
As for everyone else, thanx for the comments and criticizms. They will all be noted and the appropriate changes will be made once i have time.
One thing though, u guys never answered my question on what i should replace the "G-book" section with.
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dont hide the enter button....
site is ok, lose deactivate button... put picture of u in there...
those have already been said but thats all i can really think of
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