"Intro" check pls

**I_am_Tarzan** · 10-31-2002, 08:21 PM

made a little slow "intro" (more a presentation of a poem)
Link, watch out, it's pretty sad

how u think it is ??

I already know i have to make the text fade away much slower.

**Eyenovation** · 10-31-2002, 09:44 PM

Very well done.
Is that you on the ivory?
Good stuff.

**I_am_Tarzan** · 10-31-2002, 10:45 PM

thx, me on the ivory ??
what you mean with me on the ivory, my home language isnt english so i kinda suck at such sentenses (and all other english stuff).

**Eyenovation** · 10-31-2002, 10:57 PM

The piano.
Ivory is a slang term for white keys.

**sbi444** · 10-31-2002, 11:26 PM

I agree, the music is pretty cool. Good stuff all around except on some of them I was hoping it would move faster. Also, the image of the guy with the green eye (says warriors of destiny or something light in the bg) jumps around a bit, but that's just nit-picking. Maybe something at the end, like a replay button perhaps? Overall, nicely done.

**alty29** · 10-31-2002, 11:41 PM

was that sting?

**ushino** · 11-01-2002, 08:22 AM

nice stuff but its a bit slow there

**slinky2000** · 11-01-2002, 10:31 AM

possibly a bit slow, but nice atmosphere, drawings and music goes great with the intro! well done!

I dont see many slow intros that are so good!

**I_am_Tarzan** · 11-01-2002, 10:31 AM

Thanks for your input guys.

The loop i got here from flashkit.com, sbi444 i dont really know to move it faster or slower because some people tell me to move it slower to. I think i'll let it at this speed.
I'll romove the jumping pic and insert a reply button.

**sbi444** · 11-01-2002, 01:56 PM

Naw, I wasn't saying to remove the image entirely, just tweak it a bit so that it doesn't shift the way it does. Really it's just a minor thing and nothing to bother with too much.

**I_am_Tarzan** · 11-01-2002, 02:08 PM

yea, i ment romove the tweening.

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