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  1. 12-21-2002, 10:09 PM #1
    trinitron2k2
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    take a look at this

    Please take a look at this site and tell me what you think of it

    What needs to be changed, added, removed, etc.

    Thank you very much
    http://www.eprolix.tk
  2. 12-21-2002, 10:19 PM #2
    No-Tec
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    how old are you?
    maybe.
  3. 12-21-2002, 11:51 PM #3
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    What kind of reply is that? hahaha...

    Comments:
    - Great site. Very nice design. Clean, whitish grayish colors.
    - I really like the layout.
    - Menu is cool. I like how it looks like it's "built into" the side of the module.
    - Hey! You seem to have a nicely developed portfolio.

    Great site!
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  4. 12-23-2002, 04:46 PM #4
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    Very nice work
  5. 12-23-2002, 05:05 PM #5
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    Prototype3x, (and everyone else) look here :

    http://www.flashkit.com/board/search...earchid=145350

    Look at your response.....

    >> Nice.
    >> Very Nice Work.
    >> Nice Work.
    >> Cool.
    >> Very Nice Work.
    >> Nice.
    >> Good Stuff.
    >> Very Nice Stuff.
    >> Not.

    ................ did you suffer a stroke or are you just lookin for a way to up that post count?
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  6. 12-23-2002, 06:38 PM #6
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    So hard to read grey text on white background.
  7. 12-24-2002, 02:18 PM #7
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    I like the layout and design of this site but, the fact that your portfolio is a link to another site just doesn't work well. The portfolio site is not bad either but, it doesn't go with your original site. You should finish one of these sites and also a few in your portfolio. It appears you have a lot of started geocities sites but none are completed. You may be trying to build your portfolio so that it looks like you have done a lot of work but, its better to show a few of your best completed works.
    I think the question about the age comes from the "buliding portfolio," we have all tried making lt look bigger early in our careers, and also some of the drawings in the portfolio look like a young kids artwork. Hope that wasn't too harsh...
  8. 12-26-2002, 03:21 AM #8
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    I like it.
    but...

    I would have liked the quotes in the top where your logo is and have the content load on the section where the tiger is.

    Thats just me.
    also the text should me alittle darker probably #333333.
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  9. 12-26-2002, 03:25 AM #9
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    also on your portfolio try telling people what each thing is when you mouse over each of the buttons.

    I cant tell if it is a site, graphic design or something else.
    "Who are these Kids and why are they caling me dad!"
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