only 17 years old !!!

[tohid]

Hi
I'm Tohid Golkarzadeh 17 years old .

Please check my 2003 version site and reply it.


http://www.golgraphic.com


Thanks

[James Bending]

Hello, the website wasnt to bad.. you might want to reduce download time, and on your splash page only use html / graphic. I didnt like the music at all, but thats a personal thing. The intro as a whole was nice, though i didnt have an option to skip it during or before it loaded. The other loader for the site came as a nasty suprise. Try using cleaner lines instead of the scrappy ones i dont think it came across very well on the site. MUTE BUTTON. please. But otherwise it was a nice start, dont let my rather dull critiscm put you down, you should work on your style more and try and make your website a standard up from where it is now

By the way im 17 aswell

James

[Rukuwa]

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[slayerment]

hey i think its very nice. good job. the only thing i have a hard tim w/ is the hand as ur loading clip. it too whoswe like imho. i dunno though. keep it up!