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    Please Critique my Ad---DUE WED!!!

    Hi there, I am working on an ad for my company. It is a half page ad for one of our trade magazines. Well, everyone here seems to like the ad, except for my boss!! He feels that it is lacking something. Now, he is not a design professional, rather, a business man. I'm an in-house designer, with no one else to look to for expertise in this area, and would really appreciate your feedback! Thank you in advance!!!!


    Valerie

    Please be honest, if it sucks, TELL ME. I need to know what is wrong with it!!!

    Thank you Thank you thank you!
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    It's just too plain....since your advertising is for various kinds of wiring... I expected something energetic (intense colors such as red, or yellow)...something that represents ENERGY.

    (Please take no offense to this..i'm by far NOT AN AD-JUDGING PERSON..and don't hit the monkey!!)

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