first attempt

[jen0dorf]

Hi people

As a total new user I have been playing!!

I freely admit my guilt I poached the snow effect!

I'm trying to create the idea of a house shivering and snow falling in winter.

The page I've created is at

www.edwards-micros.co.uk/snow.htm

The flash works but I'm not impressed can any kind person look at it and suggest how to make it better?

Thanks

Ian

[Veniogenesis]

Might be better for the Swish Sitecheck: http://www.flashkit.com/board/forumd...php?forumid=55

Regards,
Venio

p.s. Your URL is wrong. You're trying to link to a file on your own
hardrive. You have to change the URL to something on the internet,
and you'll have to upload the SWF movie onto your server as well.

So right now, nothing shows up.