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    Site review...will return the favour

    Hi would appreciate your comments on our site, it is being constantly altered.
    Especially the loop controls, as this was causing a problem before..thanks in advance guys!

    Click on the Flash only please (the html is dismal at present)

    Lee French

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    i like it,
    1 suggestion though, put it in a java window

    here is the link on how
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    k now you gotta live up to your end of the bargain

    my work site i just finished


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    great

    It looks good, but one thing, the enter page in my opinion should be in html.

    I like the bg music, and the computer screen on the main page. The transitions are good

    When you click on a piece of art, the way it opens doesnt look that professional. Otherwise, great job :-)


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    i agree. but i think you need to change FPS a tiny bit. other than that, its fine........ i like the way the computer screen appears, nice effect
    good work
    heres mine

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    nice

    I like.

    The music is very soothing. would maaaaybe suggest increasing the
    quality and lowering the volume (i'm into digital music production
    so i guess i'm fussy)

    I love the space scene but really don't like the astronaut. Its
    your work and all but i would sooo think about loosing him. as
    it stands its a nice calm image of space but then this python esque
    fugure flies past.

    Very soothing and spacey piece.

    now you can "return the favour" hehe.

    take care.

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    Disagree about the pop-up suggestion, but couldn't the page just load in the same window?

    Also the blue on the left seems a bit cheap - a bit too primary maybe?

    The whole thing is quite threadbare but that could be its appeal, I don't know.

    Return the favour?

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    Many thanks

    Thanks again for reviewing my site..

    Although, nobody has answered the question regarding the loop control is there any -problem with it..pls let me know..
    thanks in advance

    Lee..

    P.s I have reviewed all of your sites now..and i had quite a lot to say..thats normal though..

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    To be totally honest, this style does not appeal to me at all. I had trouble using the navigation system (the menu's would not go away after I had moved my mouse off of them), sometimes more than one menu at a time would open up, having to wait for the launch project button to appear is annoying, and confusing because I first clicked on the name of the project in the menu, and that didn't launch it, so then I tried clicking on the thumbnail to the right, that didn't do it, then I finally realized that I had to wait for the launch button to appear.

    The site design as I said before does not appeal to me, it is interesting I will give you that much. I think you need to work on the navigation system a lot. It needs to be less complicated. Try focusing on functionality as opposed to "coolness" factor. Oh and as a last thing I think you either need to speed up your shorten the time your animations take to complete or speed up your framerate on your movie.

    - MAD

    P.S.
    Thanks for the review.

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    thanks for the review.

    Hi Mad

    I a bit confused man, i thought the navigation was the best bit of the site!!..it works in the same way Windows works ie after you rollover a link at the top a sub menu rolls down with an arrow by the each section when you roll over your choice of arrowed links a further menu rolls in (all related to giving you choice) you can then clicking on your selection which begins an animated section of your choice you then have the option of leaving the site (if its portfolio)or rolling over the i (info=on the image displayed)

    Hope you had a glitch..coz the action script involved nearly broke my head..lol

    Cheers anyway
    Lee.

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    hi lee

    had no problem with nav at my end

    like this site .... nice and mellow - koool

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    nice, but i feel there are too many lines for some reason.
    and some of the animations are a little ropey, like the square, with the grey bkg. it kind happens the wrong way.

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    Thanks.....

    I still need a few more reviews..if possible
    Can someone answer about the stereo thing..is is ok..

    Thanks in advance
    Lee..

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    hi lee ... stereo works like a dream m8

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