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  1. 06-13-2003, 05:16 PM #1
    eblack4012
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    Flash intro check

    Hi guys,

    Can I get some feedback on my Flash intro I'm doing for a friend's web site? I tried to get a Matrix type animation but it didn't come out quite the way I'd like it. Any suggestions would be apprecited. By the way, it's about 950KB so 56kers beware. I'm still working on the optimization. Thanks.

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  2. 06-13-2003, 06:13 PM #2
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    Erm ...

    Very short. I like the idea. But one major thing, the font, I just can't read it!! Sort that out pls!
  3. 06-13-2003, 08:08 PM #3
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    i liked it, i'm no good with 3D so i have no suggestions. the font does need changeing though
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  4. 06-14-2003, 01:16 AM #4
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    Did I hear a counter-strike "headshot" .wav in there?

  5. 06-14-2003, 01:56 AM #5
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    Did I hear a counter-strike "headshot" .wav in there?
    Not sure, I got the sounds from the Flashkit sound FX archives.
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  6. 06-14-2003, 03:26 AM #6
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    I would say try to add more speed in there. It seemed too plain and slow for me. Cheers
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  7. 06-14-2003, 12:55 PM #7
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    Aaaaaaah, Ray Larabie's Vibrocentric font... my favorite
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  8. 06-16-2003, 11:05 AM #8
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    Robb,

    They were referring to the font I had previously used, a FFF pixel jacked up too large.
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  9. 06-16-2003, 02:36 PM #9
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    Its a cool idea but could do with more constant movement - it feels very static at the moment, perhaps have some SUBTLE text animations in there? I dont mean exploding everywhere and jiggling about every whichway because any fool can do that, but something to keep the eyes drawn away from the animation (or lack thereof while there's text to read)..

    All in all a cool idea though i'd persoanlly play around with the colours a bit, orange and that particular blue dont go well with my sensitive head..
    Good lord, it's been a while
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