First off, are there any copyright issues with the Chilly Willy character?
As far as the design goes, personally I would like to see less contrast in the background behind your name. As it is it's a bit hard to read.
Is your email and web site address the only contact info you want on there, or did you remove it for posting purposes? If you don't want to include your physical address, most people will want at least a telephone number.
You might want to make the "F" in Farrell lower case as well just for consistency's sake. Right now no one knows that you have never capitalized your first name and it just looks like a mistake. A business card is kind of like a joke, if you have to explain it to people it's not very good.
This one is just my opinion, but I think you should use the same font for the text on the bottom of the card that you use for your contact info.
Last edited by RUSHVision; 08-22-2003 at 07:34 PM.
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I dunno if you left it off on this version because you are posting it on the web...but how about a phone number on there somewhere??
I think it looks good. The only "negative" thing I was thinking was do you really need to have both "full flash sites" and "flash presentations" on there? Couldnt you combine the two somehow and then you would have more space to add a new, different statement that tells about another part of your talents?
Originally posted by dr_chilly_willy do you mean more contrast?
I knew I should have clarified that. I meant less contrast in the background which would give you more contrast for your name, which needs to stand out a little more in my opinion.
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would "multimedia flash design" include both "full flash sites" and "flash presentations" or what do you suggest?
I think that does sound better..yes.
My point is that it seems a shame to list 2 things that are basically saying the same thing (that you do Flash design) on such prime real estate as a business card..like I said, it would give you room to list an additional, separate service....
Im not sure if I can tell you what else to put there, but do see the point I am trying make? I am just trying to help you get the most bang for your buck
any suggestions on how to make the orange ness dull
I explained earlies about the phone number, I know your point is really good, I just don't want to waste money printing one number, then move to a new number.
The U, yeah i know, its the font the first time i saw it i thought it was a v.