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    Australian bar... in Turkey

    Hey all , please have a look (dont be too harsh lol) at my first site for a paying client

    Outback



    Edit : changed link from old site..
    Last edited by Esherbet; 10-10-2003 at 01:09 PM.

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    To start w/ditch the intro. 230k is too big for an intro that goes nowhere and that you didn't even create.

    I would also ditch the frames on the main site.

    Overall the site is pretty dated.

    Too harsh?

    Anyone else?

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    argh dammit!!!! that one that you posted on is the old one( it keeps redirecting to the wrong place!), this is the place its supposed to go to:

    Better site

    phew i thought you were talking about the full flash one for a sec.

    Last edited by Esherbet; 10-10-2003 at 01:22 PM.

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    Alright, now this I can handle! Nice work Esherbet! Good, crisp animations. A couple things...

    The dragable menu: In my opinion I dont think it needs to be dragable but if you are going to keep it dragable I would code it out so that it has to stay within the scope of the movie. I drug it half way off the page and couldn't move it back because the dragable area was out of the movie. So the menu was stuck have way off of the page.

    Music selection: IMHO I don't think Foo Fighter and Queens of the Stoneage fit the 'beach house' theme.

    Also the close button in the top right corner doesn't close the window.

    Nice site. Overall I really like it.

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    ah, cool. I only added the close page button about 10 minutes ago i havent added any code to it yet ,ill do that now.

    The music , it wouldnt have been my choice for a beach house but thats what the guy wanted so thats that.

    As for the menu i will probably add a bounding box, i never thought of people losing it!

    thanks for your time

    Esherbet

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    It's hard to read the "Find Us" window text. The roll over buttons should be a different color when you first roll over on them.

    I do love how the site transitions in... cool. Overall a nice site and cool layout.

    -NITIN ANAND-
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    I did originally use pixel fonts for everything but the client said he didnt really like the style so i changed it to that.

    Thanks for the comment.

    E.

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    bump..

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