Well go get Flash MX (not PRO - bleah), and post the FLA or SWF for us. And we can go from there. I would recommend taking a look at yuor local library and seeing if they have books on FLASH.
If I were you I would start by doing as many tutorials as I could find and then, once you know enough, you can start doing the AS. Or you could always just ask here in the forums. Good Luck!
You can post it here or in the Flash General Help forum and if you're lucky you might find someone looking for a job that's willing to continue someone else's work.
About your file. It's only a couple of tweens so everything seems to be ok except I couldn't up-load the external file at the end because it wasn't included.