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    Feedback pls

    www.gradinite.com

    pls ignore the language(it's romanian) ..i'd like a design feedback

    thnx

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    Welcome to FlashKit!

    I wouldn't say there is anything particularly wrong with your design. The advertisments column at the right ruins the overall look though.

    The navigation column is too wide. Your content column should be visually wider than your navigation module.

    The colors are nice though. It gives a smooth and calm look to the site.


    Good work!
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    thnx for the feedback. i'll think about the advertisments column how to be removed. u'r the first one to say that about the navigation column so i'll have to think about it too

    thnx

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    I figure the sites too white... If you had some color _regions_ like a column thats a solid color it might look a bit nicer.

    Having just plain white and colored outlines is a nice look but I think color regions/areas might be better.

    - emk

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    Having just plain white and colored outlines is a nice look but I think color regions/areas might be better.
    where would u suggest this color regions?

    thx

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    ok ... maybe have the content section as one solid region with a background to define it.

    Hm..... ok heres a mockup:



    Just an idea.

    - emk

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    ok...i got u'r point..i'll try to work the top part..as your mockup

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    It was just a suggestion...
    Anyway hope to see what you come up with.

    - emk

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    bine ai venit
    de ce gradinite.com si nu gradinite.ro?

    incearca sa mai bagi culori vesele ...de ex la logo-ul de sus dreapta
    .....si poti sa mai ridici putin meniul ca sa se vada si ultimul buton (am rezolutia de 1024)...in rest arata bine
    spor la facut bani din publicitate

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    [romanian] bine te-am gasit..poate ca era mai bine dk comunicam in engleza sa inteleaga toti... .ro era luat...la mine se vede bine ultimul buton la 1024 si cu google toolbar [/romanian]

    my friend told me that he does not see the last button from the menu at 1024...do u see it guys?

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    Personally, I feel that there are too many colors. Also, the ads are bigger than the company name. Isn't that a bit odd? I would not want the other companies to stand out more than my own.

    The curved green lines on the right seem almost to be an afterthought. Not really sure that they add anything to the site.

    Overall, seems to be a nice workable layout.
    Kerry

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    well..i forgot to mention that "gradinite" means kindergarden and the website is for the parents who search info for their kid...what u say about the "company name" it's true...and a haven't noticed that before...i'll write it down and try to figure smth out...if u have any suggestion u'r welcome to express it

    thanx

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    [The curved green lines on the right seem almost to be an afterthought. Not really sure that they add anything to the site.
    the green lines are between the menu and the the rest of the site...and on the right the same reason

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    Design

    The design is cool, but I think I'd have to be able to read more (the language thing you mentioned) to make a fair assessment.

    - Ben Yokitis

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    Re: Design

    Originally posted by byokitis
    The design is cool, but I think I'd have to be able to read more (the language thing you mentioned) to make a fair assessment.

    - Ben Yokitis
    well, as i told someone in a previous post the site is about kindergarden and some other information about childhood

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    I thought the site was decent, nice designs.

    [swf]http://neimpressions.net/defaultup.swf[/swf]

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    thanx...the swf over there doesn't work

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    check out the chages i've made

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    Honestly I only see slight changes.

    I'm still pushing my suggestion for "colored regions" though.
    Thanks for the update.

    - emk

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    well...i thought about the colored regions but i guess the content is more important and more color will distract the users from the info they are looking for..don't u think so?

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