early feedback please

[smo_2112]

real early build of my own website. it feels like it needs something, which is the reason for such an early post. any thoughts or ideas any of you have would be greatly appreciated. also, opinions on design would be great!! thanks all!!

http://www20.brinkster.com/visitor/slider.html

[snoop_doug]

I think you probably need to address the balance of the content, too much happening on the right of the screen without compromise for me. Personally at this stage I'd try centering everything down the middle so that the 'V 04' was just above the menu and the blue and whitebars at the top alinged with the bars underneath.

Looks promising.