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Vector Art.
Just thought I would check and see if anybody likes this. Link:
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Hi bluefern,
I presume you're asking for feedback? The figure is OK-ish, but if you want to get better, here are some points to look for:
1. The vector figure looks very awkward against the pixel background
2. Various parts (dress strap, glass rim...) are too roughly drawn to feel comfortable
3. Glass colour is too muddy - make it more transparent/use a different colour
4. Hair colours are too harsh next to skin tones
5. Girl's neck has too much detail -- looks too old for her face
6. Hand should be larger and look a little less "porky" - nail is definitely too small
Re-reading the above points, they seem kind of negative. If you are just starting out on doing vector drawings, this isn't bad...General thing is, watch proportions, exaggerate a little if it seems necessary, choose colours carefully...
HTH
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Vector Art.
Thanks goliard.
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