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This is the very beginning of a cartoon I'm working on. I thought the best way to learn how to do one of these would be to just tackle it. If I wait til I learn to draw, I'll never do it.
Anyway, although I still have a ton of work to do, this project is officially underwear -- I mean, underway.
http://demo.voikos.com/animation/oxymoron3.html
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You're to hard on yourself. You draw fine.
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I'm impressed. And you did all of that with KoolMoves?
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Nice, a few little suggestions-
1.have the light flicker, when it is hit
2.straighten up your lines
3.and more shadows
Otherwise great job, I love the timing of the light, great movement, you have very good drawing skills, don't be so hard on yourself
Brad
-I like your footer, cute
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I'm slowly working on this project and incorporating suggestions. Thanks. I probably won't post about this again until it's pretty close to being finished.
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Okay, I lied. Here's an attempt to incorporate more shadows as Brad suggested. I only worked on the head region. Then it dawned on me that, since the light bulb moves, the shadows had to move also. Thanks a lot, Brad!
Anyway, see if this movement is worth all the trouble. I could always take it back out.
http://demo.voikos.com/animation/oxymoron4.html
Thanks.
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The more I watch it the more I laugh- Good Job.
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