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    This is the very beginning of a cartoon I'm working on. I thought the best way to learn how to do one of these would be to just tackle it. If I wait til I learn to draw, I'll never do it.

    Anyway, although I still have a ton of work to do, this project is officially underwear -- I mean, underway.

    http://demo.voikos.com/animation/oxymoron3.html

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    I like it.


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    You're to hard on yourself. You draw fine.

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    I'm impressed. And you did all of that with KoolMoves?

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    Nice, a few little suggestions-

    1.have the light flicker, when it is hit
    2.straighten up your lines
    3.and more shadows

    Otherwise great job, I love the timing of the light, great movement, you have very good drawing skills, don't be so hard on yourself

    Brad

    -I like your footer, cute

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    I'm slowly working on this project and incorporating suggestions. Thanks. I probably won't post about this again until it's pretty close to being finished.

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    Okay, I lied. Here's an attempt to incorporate more shadows as Brad suggested. I only worked on the head region. Then it dawned on me that, since the light bulb moves, the shadows had to move also. Thanks a lot, Brad!

    Anyway, see if this movement is worth all the trouble. I could always take it back out.


    http://demo.voikos.com/animation/oxymoron4.html

    Thanks.

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    The more I watch it the more I laugh- Good Job.

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