Do You Like The Cartoon

[shortlilben]

hey here it is please tell me what you think. Its not done yet but i wanna see what you think so far. Oh yea you might wanna see the 1st one to judge the second or it wont make sence

1st one
www.albinojoe.com/chicken.html

2nd one (the one your judging)
www.albinojoe.com/chicken2.html

Oh yea btw im i just turned 13 so dont be suprised if its not as good as you think but dont let that be an excuse! I want to be judges on how good the content is not by my age,

[yojo]

Ha Ha, keep it up!

[internetjedi]

hehe thats great
I couldnt get the first link to work but the second one was cool.
I just started to do this yesterday so
you are way far advanced than me.
Great Job

[shortlilben]

Thanks for the comments guys

[Tanker300]

I like that, you have a great imagination.Keep up the good work and keep posting your great movies.

[vbbeck]

I like your style very much. Forgive me as I am old and female, but I didn't really get the second one. I'm not sure how important that is as I enjoyed watching both very much.

Thank you for putting these up. I will keep an eye out for your next work.

[shortlilben]

Thanks this is what keeps me animating and helps me work to get better ill try to finish the second one soon

[arikb]

i would only suggest that you keep trying to improve yourself, dont think things like "im alredy good enough, i dont need to be better"

[mixedtrigeno]

mmmm not bad at all. i couldnt even finish my first animatiion cuse i had lost/erase the fla

[shortlilben]

Originally posted by arikb
i would only suggest that you keep trying to improve yourself, dont think things like "im alredy good enough, i dont need to be better"

Yea even the "best" can get better