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    Upholstery website... Feedback please

    Hey everyone. This is a website that I'm doing for my friend's upholstery business. Tell me what you think. Thanks.
    http://www.trugospel.com/kerry

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    it looks like some of your pixel fonts in the body copy are a little blurred. also, the effect on the "professional craftsmen" title logo gets a little annoying after seeing it throughout the site, and the whole time as a preloader. i'd do the effect a couple times after the site loads, then stop it. overall it's a very nice look, simple and clean.
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    DMB right again (Hi)

    The bouncing is really annoying. I would make the tweens have a little more easing in/out, instead of the bounce. It is very harsh.

    You have a nice style, and a nice start.

    The intro is kind of annoying to, make everything faster and use some easing in and out.
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    Yep, make all of your transitions in the fashion similar to cose/open menu, smooth out that logo lights and you'll be there.

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    Thanks guys. A little constructive criticism nevr hurts. i'll apply those suggestions once I get home. Thanks again.

    Ryan Wilson
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    nice site, in addition to wut everyone stated, IMO, the site is to "blue", you need some contrast somewhere. the text boxes, loading, etc all have a blueish bg, try using a grey to bring that out. Plus, the chair in the photo has a blue overcast, when you load a section and the blue bg is on top of that plus white text...very hard to read. also you need more depth, add some texture to the bg or something. try using a darker grey against that blue color you have... this link might help with wut im talking about

    http://www.colourlovers.com/index.cf...ettes&view=top

    Tracy

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