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    Just a general check and suggestions

    http://www.gwmsonline.net/dev/
    Any comments or suggestions would be cool. Let me know how it flows please?

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    cool site but a few suggestions. there is no grid pattern that i can see in the layout. the volume slider is out of place as the othr button/graphics are also. the logo...i thought i could navigate through that, but i cant. the "media" writing inside the logo is VERY hard to read...if that was white and set the alpha to maybe 40, you'll be able to see the animation behind it. i have no idea what the butterfly is suppose to do?? You need some kind of closed space, not boxed or anything like that but to keep all the content in a unified layout/grid. it seems that everyhthing right now is "free flowing" in open space. also, u should always have some sort of immediate contact info, wether is a number, or email, something thats always visible for the client/end user. hope this helps

    Tracy

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    navigation - low usability. no labels, and not perpetual.
    navigation - the text around your logo should be links. i kept wanting to click it!
    demo page - why the new window? that's annoying.
    front page - your logo is too hard to read. make it stand out more.
    volume - what's the slider for? there's no sound...
    blue butterfly - i like it!

    you're on the right track...just keep learning and trying new things!

    cheers, nords.

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    Just a general operation check again? If you've got immediate feedback (no matter what it is) please let me know. I'm testing for immediate responses.

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    is ur page working, b/c i try to click on it and nothing happens?

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