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client is fine with the font part. he just wants a sort of identifier that makes it look more than just the company name.
they offer "web services" ( don't ask me what's that cause i tried to find out too and got even more confused), so i went for a neutral,techy, serious identity.
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I like the type face, but I'm not too sure about the identifier (dot over "i") relating to a tech theme.
If I were to choose from these I would have to say #1 (counting by columns - column 1 = #1,#2,#3,#4 ; column 2 = #5,#6) based on the description you've given. #4, though very nice, seems better suited to a "natural gas" utility co. #5 and #6 seem a tad unfinished. The motion of the dot over the "i" leads the views eye up and away from the image.
Just a thought, with #1 - maybe try continuing the line for the dot over the "i" (with a small space to signify the dot) to the end of the word using the same shape that begins the dot to end the line though in the opposite direction - up. I hope that makes sense.
Nice work as always!
Peace!!!!
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thanks hothouse.
i tried extending the i dot, but it wasn´t working..
update here. tell me what you think.
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I quite like that!
Gives me a sense of perspective and possibility. Colors are good too.
One item that might be an issue is the legibility of the "i" itself.
Though I realize that character is an "i" some might mistake it as a continuation of the right leg of the "r", or maybe a cursive "n". I realize this is a bit picky, but in the long run beter to know someone sees this now before the client becomes attached to a particular idea.
Quick question: you're using Illustrator right?
Again...nice work!
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i prefer your last one to the others easily
really reminds me of something though - especially when the hook is on its own , just cant think what
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Graphic Artist
I like this one too, but I actually like the brown and green one more... and love the brown and green colors too
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Originally posted by hothousegraphix
One item that might be an issue is the legibility of the "i" itself.
Though I realize that character is an "i" some might mistake it as a continuation of the right leg of the "r", or maybe a cursive "n". I realize this is a bit picky, but in the long run beter to know someone sees this now before the client becomes attached to a particular idea.
Quick question: you're using Illustrator right?
first, thanks.
secondly, very true. i had already spotted out that "i" issue, but don't know to what extent is it important. i mean, i can see the "n", or a sort of continuation of the "u" but i still read erius. im not seeing eruus, nor erns, nor ersus ( because i have a clear "s" at the end and it cannot be mistaken with the "i" shape).
yet it is true that although i don't read any of the previous combinations and although the "erius" is the one that stands out, it is not clearly legible.
i'll work on that.
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Originally posted by tayjax
i prefer your last one to the others easily
really reminds me of something though - especially when the hook is on its own , just cant think what
i have the same feeling. any ideas of what brand is it resembling?
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Graphic Artist
I read ERIUS too.... I just dont see an "n"......
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Still wondering if your using Illustrator?
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good one - good try..
illustrator ?
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no. i'm using flash. i always use flash for the concept and design. i then use illustrator to polish the idea, get all the curves right, and optimize it.
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