zebrafire vs. DaVulf :: Prettier than O

[zebrafire]

I'm looking for an opponent for my first time EVER (yo.) PS Battle. YAY!

Here are my rules.

650 x 500
rotation allowed
must use an aspect from previous image
no theme
4 volleys each

See? Only 5 rules... I'm easy!

dun dun dun....my serve. Yeah!




All done.

[ondraedan]

hi pretty girl, you're good at photoshop!

someone battle her. she's cool.

[DaVulf]

What's the turnaround time? If it can be a few days then I might take this up to give me a break from exams.

[zebrafire]

sure.

72 hours okay?

[DaVulf]

That can work. I'll start working soon.

[pea3698]

Welcome to the Arena Zebrafire. If you really are a of the female race please stick around here. This place is a bloody sausage fest. But beware Nats might get jealous. Once again Welcome. And just to get it out of the way, are you truly open to critique. I mean the real mean nasty ones or just the slights.. Cause I don't have one for you lol. Just figured i'd ask for future reference.
Great serve. Leaves the playing field wide open...

[Natsia]

Im trying so hard not to burst out laghing... Dont want the boss to know Im not working..
Pea,
Welcome Zebs, hope you are a girl, we need more ladies round here.

[carly1979]

Welcome Zebs, hope you are a girl, we need more ladies round here.

^ what she said ^


nice serve

[zebrafire]

dude.

What is it with the doubting of my sex?

=P

Of the female race? nice.


Anyway, unless ondraedan is gay, I'm a girl.

=D


oh - and critique away..I don't care.

[ondraedan]

tis proof.

you all are animals.

[mrkvavle]

its a girl!

[DaVulf]

Ooooo, you scored the mighty Ond. He's a legend around here you know. Don't worry, I'm 40% done a return .

[Natsia]

its a girl!

Its a PRETTY girl!

[EVPohovich]

I think she is a "ringer".....DaVulf, she's got your number dude.

Welcome to FK zebrafire, I'll forgo all the basic "read the rules" ramble as I am sure O has tuned you in on what happens here. Good Luck, and give him a swift kick in the pants for me



nice catch O...

[pea3698]

"female race" hehehe you liked that eh. Well you females of of a completely different sort than members of the "male race". I was trying to be political. Also sorry I didn't know that you had mentioned being a girl. And btw thanks for the mental picture Nats :yummy: lol Oh and I would say good catch O but how about I say your lucky she let you catch her

Oh btw i'm pea3698, I enjoy walks on the beach, and spoiling the heck out of my ........



.... wife.

[DaVulf]

Here we go:



Comments/Crits?

Feel free to take the 3 days on this one, I won't be able to start work until Sunday or so since I've got 2 finals on Saturday.

[pea3698]

Nice composition Devulf.
I do have a couple of comments though.
It looks like the red in the apple and in the beaks of the birds is jacked up a bit high.
The tree looks muddled compared to the rest of the image.
Also the grass, tree, girl, and picnic basket don't quite look blended in the overall image. They have that cut out look to them.
The font choice looks more wild west than relaxing by the lake.

Overall the image has great composition just needs some blending. Sorry if that seemed like a lot of bad and not much good but I know you can take it .

[Dave-O]

the lighting on the elements seems off, IE: basket & apple, tree, girl and grass

just seems to be out of place with the water

[edit] what pea said

[Dricciotti]

What is with the leaves? They look huge and blurry compared to the tree. Was that part of the stock or added?

[zebrafire]

aww thanks Nats..

And no pea I didn't mention prior to that I was a girl - O did - but I thought it was curious how y'all were all skeptical of my 'race.' = P


DaVulf - I am so glad you've returned already. I am so excited to do my return and I have a slight patience problem =P...that I am working on...sorta.



ooo...I'm not a ringer, so don't be scared. To be honest - I have only been playing with Ps for like a week. - I wanted to make pretty pictures. =D