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    I made this!

    Lame title.
    Anyway, did this for a club here today, thought it came out pretty cool.
    I wanted it to be simple and emphasize that it would be about bodies 8008135!
    Didnt have a lot of time, but what do you chaps think?
    Would this grab your attention?


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    I think it would be cooler if the USN logo background and your background were the same color, make it blend better but this is definately babe-olicious

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    I know, it ruins it. But thats what they gave me and said "THIS IMAGE HAS TO BE THERE!"
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    Looks great - the knot on her bikini bottoms coming under the text bothers me slightly - but other than that I think it does the job perfectly.


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    *raises hand, twirls finger in a circle while rolling eyes*

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    hehe...just kidding ...looks good and i agree with the other stuff that's been said.

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    make it in flash or photoshop

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    Quote Originally Posted by detroitwhat
    make it in flash or photoshop
    most confusingly random post ever.

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    Meh, considering it was done in under 20 mins in corel draw. Meh.
    Thanks for the feedback guys.
    I shall endevour to do better next time round.

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    I like it, Nats. I think your decision to use the silhouette really does a great job of making the bikini stand out.
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    not really scream for attention.
    id add some soft sparkles or flares to that BG to light it up a bit. also id do something about the font, now its too plain.

    but the ipod girl looks great

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    Ipod girl?

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    oh ok. Havent seen that one.

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    the style was always there, but apple just commercializes it nowadays

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    Why not make the background black like the logo and the girl the gradient, might pull the whole thing together a little more, and not look like it's cut and pasted.
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    looks good

    ya appl esteals allot of ideas

    lol jk but i perfer pc neways
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    uyiuyi

    This last one is more designed: The contrast between the figure and background is high.
    In the firts people must to concentrate in the picture to distinguish what is about it, but it look very nice, I only say that the background should be more clear.
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    P.S: Sorry for my english, I don't speek this languaje. (S' -> Saludos...)

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