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I made this!
Lame title.
Anyway, did this for a club here today, thought it came out pretty cool.
I wanted it to be simple and emphasize that it would be about bodies 8008135!
Didnt have a lot of time, but what do you chaps think?
Would this grab your attention?
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2008 Man of the Year
I think it would be cooler if the USN logo background and your background were the same color, make it blend better but this is definately babe-olicious
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I know, it ruins it. But thats what they gave me and said "THIS IMAGE HAS TO BE THERE!"
Bleh.
Clients.
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Senior Member
Looks great - the knot on her bikini bottoms coming under the text bothers me slightly - but other than that I think it does the job perfectly.
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He has risen!
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la-dee-da, aren't you special?? 
hehe...just kidding ...looks good and i agree with the other stuff that's been said.
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make it in flash or photoshop
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2008 Man of the Year
 Originally Posted by detroitwhat
make it in flash or photoshop
most confusingly random post ever.
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Meh, considering it was done in under 20 mins in corel draw. Meh.
Thanks for the feedback guys. 
I shall endevour to do better next time round.
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Senior Member
I like it, Nats. I think your decision to use the silhouette really does a great job of making the bikini stand out.  
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not really scream for attention.
id add some soft sparkles or flares to that BG to light it up a bit. also id do something about the font, now its too plain.
but the ipod girl looks great 
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oh ok. Havent seen that one.
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the style was always there, but apple just commercializes it nowadays
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Senior Citizen
Why not make the background black like the logo and the girl the gradient, might pull the whole thing together a little more, and not look like it's cut and pasted.
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This last one is more designed: The contrast between the figure and background is high.
In the firts people must to concentrate in the picture to distinguish what is about it, but it look very nice, I only say that the background should be more clear.
S'
P.S: Sorry for my english, I don't speek this languaje. (S' -> Saludos...)
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