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    Whew... I feel like a fight.

    I was a heavy poster here a while ago, but changed my forte from Flash and other languages to being a student at the Art Institute. I'm LOVIN the images here and think I can really learn a lot from some of you. New to the battle scene, but no noob to photoshop.

    *Under 700x600
    *rotation ok
    *up to 2 people may return
    *use element from last volley
    *turnaround time 1-2 weeks, but lets keep this going.

    Think I got it all... service.


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    Im really liking the selective colouring on this one.
    Overlays are good too, but the edges could have been cleaned up and softened a little more, they look a bit "stencled" right now...
    Personal nit-pick, I would have had a darkened sky but, thats just me.
    Good job, I'll be watching this one - hope some one steps up soon.

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    the girl is good, i think her alone on a plain backgroun, with more "tattoos" would have been better off, def clean up the edges on the flowers.
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    Gasbag, I like how you did the text in your image although maybe a little but less opacity on the checkered overlay would look good.


    ps. you didnt use the file size specified by Phix.

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    Ah nice.. got a little worried there for a sec.

    Nice one though. Will come up with something in the next few days.

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    yeh my monitor is abit bright so i can't see details like that.
    sorry bout the dimension size, didn't realise, i just copied the serve into PS and used to same canvas, not sure how the size changed :S

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    actually yeh, the serve is only 525px wide, I thought the dimensions looked a bit off to be 600x700

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    Sorry took so long... school hurts free time.

    Wish I could do more.

    Last edited by Phix; 08-02-2006 at 12:39 AM.

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    I just realised the rules state UNDER 600x700 so I guess the image dimension wasn't wrong after all.
    I'll be accepting apologies in the form of money

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    The first image was 525 x 700...

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    Full composite. Hope the contrasts/levels are all satisfactory.
    I used the flower from the previous volley.
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    Phix that's pretty cool man. The text reflection and thin rugged outline are nice touches

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    looks good GB but I think you could have masked the tree a little better (especially where it is against the blue sky) and tried to make it blend in with the rest of the image.

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    How many more do you want to do gb? I failed to mention a volley limit...

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    Somethin is missing from this one, but I cant quite place it... lack of texture maybe...?

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    Phix, I like how you did the text in this image. It looks very good.

    I do agree though that this image lacks some texture as well as some cohesiveness. The elements in the image dont tie together or fit together and it is hard to see what the theme or message of this image is.

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    Sooo cool.
    Love that serve fix.
    Love the text love the colour.
    Love it.
    Nice work.

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    Thanks for the crits Dri- I was goin for the idea that "nature" is a little hard to find nowadays, you have to drive a little ways to be "in nature"... I spose I could add more text or something to convey that. I'll keep playing with it.

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    yeah im guessing the light fixtures are supposed to be tree trunks?? anyways, it reminds me of the one i did against carly

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