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    Please Critique my NEW FLASH SITE

    I am very new to flash and PHP and I am just wanting some suggestions and critiuqes about my site. If you have any suggestions or comments please let me know and i will certainly take your opinion into consideration. I am interested in making this site the best that it can be. I am also very interested and making a better contact form. I like the one thats there however i would like some validation for email and stuff. If anyone knows about php please feel free to help out. Over all just critique the site and if there is something you like please tell me if there is something you hate please share that as well. I am open to all suggestions. Thanks again and have a great week.

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    Your logo text should shrink when the button is depressed.
    Yeah it looks way better now but...


    I don't want to ask...










    did you... use...


    Ok. Well have a nice one!
    Have a wonderful day!
    http://www.gpathmedia.com!

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    Yes i did get some help. I looked tons of places and got ideas and different templates and just started editing them to figure out what i like. I have learned so much by doing that. Kind of like reverse engineering. Look at something that is rebuilt and you can work backwards to learn how it was done. I could never do this site by scratch though but im happy the way it turned out. I'm not ashamed lol. I am actually glad its done so i can get a break from messing with it. Maybe later i can go back and mess with it. Well anyways thanks for the comments.

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    A Clever Cherrry Indeed
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    The typography needs looking at as its clear its a template at the moment, you need to integrate the style more

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    It reminds me of stuff from Monster Templates.

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    http://blog.mar.sg/white-screen-of-death.jpg

    I'm still coming up with the reasons as to why I got the white screen of death. I'm using Opera anyway.

    But I bet its a nice site nevertheless. Keep it up.

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    Your customers wont know it's a template, and won't care. The thing to watch for are the few grammer errors, missing words and such. And this may not be important, but the fonts seem to change to much, maybe its just the size changing I don't know, we have such a clear standard at work and they are way to strict about it, your site would never get past content review here, lol. And for gawd sake get rid of the bg music.
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    Once again i appreciate everyones thoughts about my site. First of all i want to say that this site is a company site however it is my company site not a client that i am working on. Second I thank you for pointing out the grammatical errors of the site i have had some other people look over that as well. I have yet to fix it but i will get to it. And last of all yes it is a template I don't pride myself on knowing tons of flash. I am actually extremely new and it was tons of work for me to actually edit that template my self. However i did it and there are lots of people cant even do that. Anyways i appreciate all your effort to look over my site.

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    It's a template... I hate those, sorry, won't comment upon templates.



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