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Thread: Just launched my clothing line!

  1. #1
    Veteran Member
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    Feb 2000

    Just launched my clothing line!


    theres a couple things i'd still like to do but for the most part is all on there.

    i think IE gets some errors when calling my 'lightbox' feature from flash.

    any suggestions?

    thank you!
    "Every man's work is always a portrait of himself."

  2. #2
    Dignitary rynoe's Avatar
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    Jan 2003
    The transitions to enlarge the pix are nice, but I don't like the background and the splash page.

  3. #3
    Remotely Driven Googooboyy's Avatar
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    Nov 2001
    Nowhere near you.
    1) Overall UI wasn't badly designed (not bad~!).
    2) The graphics/photos were treated nicely.
    3) The shirt designs are good, imho.
    4) Buttons lack audio feedbacks (currently only visual feedbacks)
    5) I think you are selling direct from your site so you may wish to include a page which explains how payments/shipping/terms are handled.
    6) For a business operating online, a residential/commercial address will GREATLY add credibility to your operations.
    7) I note that there were no disclaimer or IP/copyrights notice for your designs. You may wish to protect your shirt designs by inducing a copyrights ownership over your produts.
    8) I assume your 'lightbox' features is the zooming in of your shirts?
    9) Your designs have a 'fun'+'Rocking' appeal to them, but its somehow not shown in your website. This isn't bad, per se. This may actually be difficult to pull off, but I think your website is getting drowned out by the overpowering images. Go for less boxy borders in your UI and add elements of your shirt designs into your background.
    10) Smile often.

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