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    Well, what can I say. Nothing special, looks like a modified template. Some pages got messed up borders. Basicly you need to make it more attractive by changing some image and content locations I think. Now all pages look the same and a different background colour doesnt fix this. Try to give it all a personal touch.
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    What he said.

    1. I would just keep one background color for all of them. And IMO the BG color of the "Currents Page" is better. I'd stick with that one.

    2. Its lacking aesthetics. Like small icons here and there would help.

    3. You'd want a little more copywrinting (textual content) on the home page for SEO purposes.

    4. Play around with the fonts a bit.

    5. Lastly, If you know CSS, convert the pages to a CSS layout. this is a no biggie tho just a matter of personal preference.

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    Well the pic of trees in the front looks blurry. You need to have more vibrant colors and make it crisper... maybe sharpen it. I also agree with bloop. The colors and buttons are kind of plain and need more style. Try playing with type solutions as well.

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    Maybe a little bit of appropriate animation would help define the feel your trying to express, and I agree about some of the pictures being blurry.
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