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    Flasher
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    ARDesigns v3.0

    Hi guys. I'm just looking for some constructive criticism/feedback on my portfolio site: http://www.ardesigns.net .

    Thanks,
    Sportzguy933

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    I liked how all the colored boxes were coming up but the last one shouldn't be the same color as the background. The home, contact us, and price quote are blurry fonts while about us and portfolio are sharp... stick with the sharp on all and bring the menu into the rest of the site, don't leave it floating. The thank you for visiting is too close to the dotted line, give the text some breathing room (same for other sections). On about us the some non profits ... text is black and hard to read. Make your price quote load into your main flash, why do you want a pop-up? Your portfolio needs to be in there as well.

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    Flasher
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    Yeah my portfolio will be done soon, I'm just waiting on some files that are on the hard drive of my laptop which is being repaired. As for the fuzzy text, the text that's sharp has the same exact settings as the fuzzy text and all the text have integer coordinates. Not really sure what's wrong! Thanks for the other feedback, I'll be making some of the changes you noted soon.

    Thanks,
    Sportzguy933

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    Oh boy where do I start. First impression on the moving squares where like: "Oh cool, that is gonne be fun" then your startpage appeares and I'm like....oh boy. I see like 5 different font types you used. Just try to use only 1 and maybe another for headers. But def. not 5! It makes your whole design looks overcrowded. Also dont use bold for content text. Your menu items text looks blury so might wanna take a look at that also. Your x and y possitions are like 34.5 and 29.3. If you play some with thoose numbers and try to round them op it should be fine. Your checks on your contact form doesnt work (sorry for the 3 empty emails sended to you).

    You got a nice basic website now that you can improve by adding some images and pay a little attention to font usage. Keep it up!
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    Flasher
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    Thanks for the feedback. What kind of font do you suggest I make uniform throughout the site?

    Thanks,
    Sportzguy933

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