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    i need your Criticisms please

    Guys
    I'm making a new web site to a big company in Egypt
    so i need a second opinion and Criticisms before i launch it

    your help will be appreciated


    http://khaled.007sites.com/

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    I'm into the color scheme.... but blue for food? I don't know that it really feels agricultural to me. The menu is a little glitchy and maybe too much. And, I don't like the way the buttons disappear behind the content because I forget what I scrolled over. Also, the sliders for the text boxes really should slide the content. It irks me when I try to move the text with the square and it won't do anything. Mostly a few usability things. Oh, and how about some content initially when I go to other pages like products? Seems like I have to make 1 extra step before I ever see anything.
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    yeah, there's a bunch of glitches as mneil pointed out.

    And also like he/she said, the colors are really off for the market. I'd go with something much brighter. Like a tan/light yellow and beige with some offsets of medium/light green.

    The menu buttons are huge as well. they shouldn't take up so much space. If you look at them the site is SCREAMING the navigation bar and whispering the products/descriptions And it should be almost the opposite.

    The photos in the top right corner with the grid over them don't match the color scheme and the grids on the top of each photo doesn't flow with any other design element on the page.

    Everything you should be designing should have balance, flow and a nice color scheme. that will make the site flow much better regardless of the glitches. I honestly say start there, then work out the bugs.

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    very valuable notices , must be taking in consideration

    but what i understand that there's nothing good in my design

    but even if , thank you for you effort guiding me , very appreciative


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    I don't believe either of us is trying to say there is nothing good. We're just pointing out what we feel needs work on to really make the site solid.
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    agreed. every design could use adjustments, even if it's perfect

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    I'm totally agree with your points , and that's the main aim of this topic, to have comments

    guys you two are wonderful
    thank you very much

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