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    infidel! 0vidiu's Avatar
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    turtle swim, scene img.


    I am working on my latest game called Turtle Swim. Here is how it looks till now

    Any feedback is much appreciated!

    Have Fun,

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    Developing For Dunkets mneil's Avatar
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    I like it, the one thing I noticed is that the color and light, most apparent in the trees, don't match the eye. I want the darker trees in the background, and brighter trees in the foreground. It might work if they were different trees, but since they are apparently the same I think the darker should be in the back. I love the turtle, the chameleon(whatever it is), and the type. Overall it's very good. Oh, and I like the rings around the mountains for clouds but I'd expect to see some of that repeated in the clouds floating in the air. It makes the rings look like another "unknown" element back there.

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