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evolbeagle
11-22-2000, 08:08 PM
This is the very beginning of a cartoon I'm working on. I thought the best way to learn how to do one of these would be to just tackle it. If I wait til I learn to draw, I'll never do it.

Anyway, although I still have a ton of work to do, this project is officially underwear -- I mean, underway.

http://demo.voikos.com/animation/oxymoron3.html

johnie
11-22-2000, 08:11 PM
I like it.

johnie
11-22-2000, 08:12 PM
You're to hard on yourself. You draw fine.

djoy
11-22-2000, 09:21 PM
I'm impressed. And you did all of that with KoolMoves?

BradBradleySL
11-22-2000, 09:53 PM
Nice, a few little suggestions-

1.have the light flicker, when it is hit
2.straighten up your lines
3.and more shadows

Otherwise great job, I love the timing of the light, great movement, you have very good drawing skills, don't be so hard on yourself

Brad

-I like your footer, cute:)

evolbeagle
11-23-2000, 07:16 PM
I'm slowly working on this project and incorporating suggestions. Thanks. I probably won't post about this again until it's pretty close to being finished.

evolbeagle
11-24-2000, 11:08 AM
Okay, I lied. Here's an attempt to incorporate more shadows as Brad suggested. I only worked on the head region. Then it dawned on me that, since the light bulb moves, the shadows had to move also. Thanks a lot, Brad!

Anyway, see if this movement is worth all the trouble. I could always take it back out.


http://demo.voikos.com/animation/oxymoron4.html

Thanks.

johnie
11-24-2000, 03:11 PM
The more I watch it the more I laugh- Good Job.