intro check, finished ;)

Hi,
I posted last month this intro, now its finished, please tell me what you think.

http://www.manmanworld.com

Nice work, REALLY NICE, but that song is copyrighted, aint it?

KEEP UO DA GOOD WORK! THAT SITE ROCKS~!

Great job. And if you need music for your intro just let me know http://www.cycloidsounds.com

I really like the intro. Very creative with the text!

my comments are about the same as the others. Nice effects, watch your back on the copyright. The only thing that jumped out at me was the photograph. It was so out of style with the rest of a very cool piece. Also, didn't understand the, "we've just shown you step by step..." part. Perhaps that is addressed later. Great job though.

thank you for the comments, very useful! DocNice: I see what you mean about the photograph...

Thanks again!

very ncie and simple intro here! maybe a bit slow paced but all ncie!