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allright, I just desinged a site,..
for my "sister in law" so no corporate stuff.
this will be her personal site.. she love it
so that pleases me already..
it's not 100% finishd though ..no preloader also ..
tell me what YOU think..
http://www.pasteleven.com/linn/
thanx
functionable, looks good, easy to navigate, all in all good. but you might want to make sure its not TOO simple, if you know what i mean, maybe not have the same picture of her, maybe it could fade out for each section and another of her come up, i dont know, im just thinking out loud. maybe add some ambience too
~ Äurora
good thinking Äurora.. i'm working on that picture detail as we speak..like i said it ain't finishd..:)
thanx on the comments..
apriciate it..
any more suggestions??
please keep your comments contructive and clean thank you!
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I see humor is a luxury some moderators can't afford.
The site works well, it is simple, to the point and says what it needs to. The Flash is more than basic and loads quickly. If all sites were this well put together and loaded this fast we would see more of Flash.
The content, I see, is not finished and I look forward to seeing how the site progresses. When you have done more please return to the board, I cannot guarantee I will see it, but I will look for it.
thanx theswedishtiger for the repley..
sure i'll post when ready...
and yes there will be more
flash elements on the site..
thanx again..
Simple yes, however for a personal site on the www, it sure beats the hell out of millions of em :)
Suggestions:
Maybe one or two more images of sis :) The site is fast enough for a little variety.
Try and get your text block fonts to finish their transform so they settle on a whole number x/y. They are a tad fuzzy.
John
LittleNicky78,Quote:
Originally posted by LittleNicky78
I see humor is a luxury some moderators can't afford.
I have a really good sense of humour. Send me your funny site check comment.
david p.
Budget Nudist,
I also enjoy the simplicity and clean lines and can only repeat jofta's comments on the text....fuzziness that can be fixed as he described. It is the only criticism I could make.
BTW: spelling in 'About' - 'wirking' should be spelt 'working' (even if it sounds like wirking, stupid English language ;)).
david p.
If you don not ask me asking what exactly is your site for i could not find out, maybe i am just dumb but ?
thanx david..
the wirking part will be fixed just a misstype..
typography ditto...
thanx 4 the feedback..
Budget ...... I like the simple layout. Clean and functional. The only thing that stands out as a personal gripe is the static image to the left. It just sits there thruout your navigation. Maybe some different shots of her. Different angles? that was all i could think of. I dig :smoov: