2 little preview screens for creepy dolls... just some opinions please ;)

Hello there,
I've just uploaded 2 preview screens for a doll maker. She's got a convention to go to on saturday and wanted something up while we develop the site... - it's not set up properly yet, no preloaders - but they're only small..

Just wanted to get some opinions... if anyone can spare me a sec... the difference is mainly whether the story gets told first, illustrations used - before the photo of the doll - or whether the dolls should be introduced first, then the story...

http://www.littleappledolls.com/preview1.html = doll1 > story2

http://www.littleappledolls.com/preview2.html = story1 > doll2

Any feedback would be great ;)

i dont know what doll you are talking about, i saw a story about an apple, and his name is red.

but, id have to say...

email me for the rest of this post

... just in case... to get to the end, which is basically an e-mail link - you need to click the apple, after having finished reading the story...

Kind of freaked me out :eek:

runs into corner and hides under blankets terrified of those scarry dolls....

There doesnt seem to be alot there but i think it serves its purpose with whats there right now.

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