I think something about the image is off balance but I can't place my finger on it. :\
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d4...-moonlight.jpg
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I think something about the image is off balance but I can't place my finger on it. :\
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d4...-moonlight.jpg
Ok, confusion clarified, on with the show:
http://www.3primates.com/artview/artwork/kungfu_02.jpg
3P
i think this thread is getting messy, unfortunately.
i dont know who follows who anymore :confused:
Zacaboo, nice job. That is one of your best images I feel. The only thing I would have done different is have the entire word 'dancing' be in front of the white sillouette that way there is more contrast in the text.
well done :) I like how the hearts get small to the size of the stars.
Unfortunately typography is one of my weakest points. I am trying to play a little more with it and experiment.
Does anyone know of a good place to get your hands on some quality free fonts?
creativeinsomnia gave me one at one point but I lost the url.
Are you kidding me Zacaboo, that is one of the finest volleys I have seen from you. I love everything about it. The colors in the background work very well together. I like that soft painted like quality of the backround a lot. The only thing that would have worked a little better is probably what Dri pointed out.
Jujumon this thread since I first contributed to it has always been....
Just drop a quality image and that's it. That's why is an open battle.
Peace fellas.
3P I actually think the colors work better in the second one. Cool volleys all around guys
I've gotten a ton from dafont.com. 1001freefonts.com/fonts is another one I've gotten some useable fonts from.Quote:
Originally Posted by nepzap2
nepzap, check out dafont.com for some good free fonts. There is also sticky thread in the fonts forum that has information.
edit: looks like phix was thinking the same thing as me at the same exact time ;)
Thank you for the crits fellas, I agree with the text. Dri, the hearts and stars thing was a happy accident haha :shhh:
Juju, I agree with nep. I think as long as you're working hard and making your best work then that's all that really matters in this thread, and on this forum in general. The whole tennis idea is just a good way to give each other something to flow from when we often feel that dark, hollow creative block. What I've gotten most of all from this forum is more freedom to worry less about mistakes and just go all out until I find something that works well, picking up new techniques and getting into the habit of taking risks... that's more important to me than the order of returns. I don't know if that makes sense but I'm sure you agree if you understand what I mean.
3P, what an interesting idea! It takes my mind in so many directions, like way computers are set up to digitalize the traditional ways of storing information, and the taskbar just below the "window" of the book says just that for me. I think you chose a strong composition for this piece. I was just thinking that the grass is too saturated because it pulls me away from the what's going on behind it, however the book is so interesting that it's almost a great tension that keeps me staring at the image until I'm completely satisfied. 'Nough rant, great work. :thumbsup:
nep, zac: i understand completely and i agree. Although i always like to see how ppl. incorporate previous elements into theirs one, without any orders it's kinda hard to see which element from which pic they are using.
but not a big deal, carry on guys. All the images show great quality [sorry i cant give more meaningful comment now, kinda snooping away from work to do this ;)]. I hope to get my image up again whenever im free
Thanks for the kudos Zak. Well the idea for the piece was to make the viewer feel as if they were a part of the "natural" world rather than the plastic and steel most of us are used to. The heavy grass look is supposed to be like a barrier between technology and more natural elements like wood and paper. I didn't want a surreal feel, but rather hint at the idea of using technology in a way that is both usable and natural, rather than plastic coated and precise.
If I had to name the piece again I might call it "Balance".
Thanks again,
3P
jujumon.... if you look closer you will find them.
3P I've always been a fan of your work. I was just looking at the battle between you and pea... top notch work. Peace.
wow, stunning work 3P....im really into it, nice job working the other image into the center of your book, nice job!
check this out guys
http://board.flashkit.com/board/
arzuaga123 : You have to remember to read the rules of the thread you're posting in. This is the 2nd time you've wrongly posted that image. The image must contain an aspect from the previous volley, and also be 700x350. It's a pretty cool image...just take a minute to read the rules.
Wrong thread but that is pretty tight, arz. Is that the best res you can give us? I'd love to see that at least 600px wide for a little more detail in certain areas :yarr: . I like how you treated the boxy texture on each side by inverting it to maintain a healthy balance in tonality. I also admire how the distant chick is similar in her pose yet physically someone else because it makes the image more dynamic, yet it isn't so abrupt that the depth of the piece is reached immediately. I'm sure you're thinking I'm talking elementary but I would just like to point out your very simple technique to many of the FK members who are looking for a fresh tool to play with. ;) Good work.
ran outta time to spend on this so here it is unfinished, spent to long cleaning up the girl :(
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/9...6082006yd7.jpg
Sweet...I like it!
Looks very 3-d to me...
*I'll have to try it out on some of those red and green 3-d specs!
is it alright if i went next? been working on something...
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/492/mixupcopyzt0.jpg
comments/crit. welcomed
*sorry for the mixup