My personal site.Pls give me some suggestions

http://www.irisdream.com

Not finished yet. I just wanna make a full flash site. Please give me some suggestions before I make futher mistakes.

Thank you.

looks alright, you need an off button to switch the music off

Thanks, I will include that button in the config tool. Would it be bothering for user to click twice and then find the setting?

I had done so mand repeated coding in the site. And my codes in that flash files is badly organized.How to aviod this?

Now I feel really bad with too many SAME windows.:(

I second the music off button suggestion. ;)

Site looks good. I really like the HTML background. The noise box in the top left should go. It just distracts the eye and it doesn't look good or fit the site.

The info boxes look very good and I really like the buttons. The scroll is a little odd though. Users expect the arrows to scroll, not jump to the next section. Personally I would change that so that the arrows have the same effect as the drag bar.

The font is clear and easy to read. Great start. :D

Thank you all for the feedback!

I've already included sound off button, and just deleted that noise box. Yes, change the arrows is a great idea and make my site looked more elaborate. I schedule to make that stuff later.

Thank you again for the suggestions!

Everything looks good to me. I would change the music. I've heard that song on about 3,000 other websites.


http://board.flashkit.com/board/show...hreadid=290312

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I'm not a good music maker. Even through I don't know anything about music software. So I just found free music loop from flashkit. Anyway ,million thanks to flashkit.
Can you find me another good loop fit for my site? I know it's a little bit impossible. Maybe I should pay for good loops. But , I don't have enough money.....:(

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Originally posted by udreamer
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I'm not a good music maker. Even through I don't know anything about music software. So I just found free music loop from flashkit. Anyway ,million thanks to flashkit.
Can you find me another good loop fit for my site? I know it's a little bit impossible. Maybe I should pay for good loops. But , I don't have enough money.....:(

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I guess you should ask yourself if you really need the loop at all. I've never visited a page where I havnen't turned off the music as soon as I've gotten to a "music off" button. I can't speak for others, but background music on the web doesn't appeal to me. Anyway, that's my 2 cents. :)

Good luck.

Thank you . But I just wanna keep it anyway.:)

Nothing wrong with loops if you got the right one. Need a loop just contact me dude.

Aloha - Marc

http://www.iacdesign.com

oh yeah...you would need a on/off button.

It's "COMING" not "COMMING"

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Originally posted by morsery
It's "COMING" not "COMMING"

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dammit i was just going to point that out!

Thank you for all friends here in flashkit. Also I found flashkit is a great place and I won't go anyway. Special thanks to Iacdsn, I've just sent you a email about loops. I do appreciate that your are willing to give me help. By the way, I've just checked your site. It's amazing and coolest one.Just make me feel ashamed of my design ability. Your site is great brain storming work.

And sorry for my bad English. I'm just a common fellow from China, English is not my native language. I must be tough to myself, For language learning and design practising.

And I corrected that mistake.:)

PS, I had included the sound off button . It's just at right down.

Hey man, you need a loop? I use Sonic Foundry's Acid Pro 3.0. I'll create one for you, all I ask is a link back to my site.

Just let me know what you're looking for in music design...Rock, Techno, Ambient etc.

Let me know man so I can get working on it.
Nice to hear from you.

Just added loading screen.



Thank you Iacdsn , I prefer ambient, but never Rock or Hip-hop. It's a great honor to add a link back to your site. I just wanna introduce you as one of credits in my site ,and I will add a link to your site below the introduction information. After all, you take part in building the site by making sound loops. So , can I have your profile?

Hi,

I got to your thread cause you said on another thread that you are not a professional designer....I think you are...Nice work!

I love the colours. and the style is wicked. I have been doing web desingn for only around 6 months and your site is the sorta site that I am aiming to do. It is really impressive man and I couldnt flaw it if I tryed!

Keep it real.

Stef.

ops sorry thats 'design' dont wanna look stupid now do I!
Yeah, anyway get another loop man, that one is a bit psyudo deep and transparant. did you alpha it, sorry bad joke.

Stef.

I love it! Its awesome.

I had gone for this look in an earlier design, but it wasn't this good.

10 points for cleanness
10 points for colors
10 points for design
4 points for originality :(