I thought I would post this to get some tips on what could have been done better..
http://static.flickr.com/81/219439658_7e77f36f62.jpg
Taken with a Canon Digital Rebel
Shutter Speed: 2.5sec
Fstop: f/5.0
Aperture: f/5.0
ISO: 100
Focal: 28mm
http://static.flickr.com/58/219439659_82f8031878.jpg
Shutter Speed: 15sec
Fstop: f/5.0
Aperture: f/5.0
ISO: 100
Focal: 28mm
No post touch ups..
