Check me webby please!

Okay the final version 2 is up! I know the content is a little bare but I haven't been Flashing (that sounds weird) for too long. First, is the transition too fast? Second, try to mess stuff up (transitions, g-book, chat, poll) and please tell me if anything is wrong. I'm real big on making my PHP overly secure, so even PHP pros can't mess with um...not that any would ever go to my site :p. And last (I know this belongs in the game section but what the hey), any ideas for a game?

-Thanks

http://gotcool.5penguins.com

lol, good stuff man, reminds me of when I first started in flash. I love experimenting with flash, just like your experiments. Its amazing how far you can come, so keep workin.

excellent frag,....
you'll see,...as you grow older,..your stile will mature,...and you'll become better and better,...
but excellent effort,...and great dad you have over there. :))
keep it up.

(only one suggestion though,....i don't really like the font on the main menu,...it's kinda hard to read)

harv

Thanks for the replies! Is the doors opening/closing at a good speed? Hrvoje, I've been struggling with the button font and I've decided to keep it, just 'cause it really cool and not exactly unreadable.

cute site. just a couple of suggestions: change the font size of the buttons to something else, it's a bit difficult to read. And change the font size of the text as well, it's blurry when I viewed it. Try using pixel fonts so it's crisper.

Btw, nice avatar.

Thanks, WarCraft III Rules!!!

What was blury? The content font or the button font or both? A screenshot would be nice, since I'm on a Mac.

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Okay the final version 2 is up! I know the content is a little bare but I haven't been Flashing (that sounds weird) for too long. First, is the transition too fast? Second, try to mess stuff up (transitions, g-book, chat, poll) and please tell me if anything is wrong. I'm real big on making my PHP overly secure, so even PHP pros can't mess with um...not that any would ever go to my site :p. And last (I know this belongs in the game section but what the hey), any ideas for a game?

-Thanks

p.s. Be nice im only 13 :D

http://gotcool.5penguins.com

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saying your 13 won't change much actually, actually there are quite a few 12/13/14 year olds around, we will treat you the same if you act mature - which you are :)

nice site

I guess age doesn't matter in the long run, just the output of the creator :rolleyes:

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I guess age doesn't matter in the long run, just the output of the creator :rolleyes:

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it matters when you're trying to vote, drink, and hit on jail bait.
site is pretty cool, not very unique but cool.

I was referring to web development...

and whats not unique about it?

i agree

i think the fact that the rectangular layout and the links down the left hand side are the part that takes away fromt he uniqueness.

the graphics look great.

i would change the font or color of it in the content part becasue it's hard to read as well

Can you give me a screenshot of my site on a PC browser? Its very easy to read on my Mac...

im on 1024 x 768 by the by

i like it.
i think you need to change the font for all the content from a standard font to something more unique.
your maybe being a bit generous with the webskills ratings. i would class flashlevel 9/10. you, maybe a 5-6. of course, im a 10.
what does the thing in the bottom left do? owt or nowt?
keep it up

is webfolio even a word?
jh

I saw the screenshot, it looks the same as my Mac.

j_hunter182, why 5-6/10? I am a very fluent actionscripter...

i didnt mean 5/6 in a bad way.
i just wouldnt judge you a 9 by your animation skills, because i see flash more animation and presentation based than scripting based.

hey Frag,

u remind me of someone i know extremly well :)

by the way, thats me dude, i was doing similar stuff when i was 13. a wonder what 2 years can do. the last 2 years has seen the quality of my work get much better (and im getting more modest).

ill cut to the chase. dude we want u on board.

where nextgeneration. a design crew of about 10 kids none older than 16. a talented bunch (if i do say so myself). your in. if u want to be.

go see:

www.elliottrosenthal.com

and contact me from there.

oh yeah,

if your going to join, there got to be none of this. im 13 leave me alone rubbish.

in buisness thats not what clients need to hear. you have just as much experience as some of the adults around here. (not many, but some)

j_hunter182, I don't have the patience to animate, so maybe a 0.01/10 for Flash animation.

n-gen, I e-mailed you ;)

Hi,

Great site, good work and all. Only one thing and it has already been mentioned but I think not clearly enough.

The buttons. Maybe keep the font but change the colour of the text or the buttons so the text stands out a little more.

Otherwise great site.

Enjoy :p

Thanks :p