New Music Sites

http://azswindoe.com/main.htm
http://djrome.mattsdesigns.biz

Feedback would be greately appreciated. I just learned how to use instances and still working the glitches out of the swindoe site.

I think the first site doesn't do much. Do you have the music bar in a frame at the top? I'd rather you pop up the music player and keep the site intact rather than opening a pop up for each page. The site is too cumbersome to open and close each page as one navigates. The music stutters a bit.

I think the second site is way too busy. My eyes have not idea what to look at. The navigation is completely lost.

Sorry that it wasn't more positive.

PC

Thanks for the response to both site. I have been trying to get the audio player to play on the site but hasn't worked. I have an idea of what I need to do and once it is complete is will paste the changes. Again, thanks for the response.

Got to agree with mrpc, same thingie here. I"m not into your layout, i like more smooth sites, this is realy busy, after few secs of viewing my eyes started to hurt... Horrible layout.

Sorry if i was harsh,
Biro

Here is the change to the http://azswindoe.com site.

That sound when you click the button is ANOYING, realy horrible. The site looks better now, altought it could use some transmission animations... BUt much better then before.

The sound in the artists trademark. I am working on having the different sections animate. One question I have is how to get the audio player to disappear when the video player come up. Should I just have a different layer for the video player and then rest of the site is on another layer? Also what would the code be? I know that i would have contents, videoplayer.swf, (level?=frame number?). I am also having some animation added to the beginning of the site and then having the rest of the site on one page except for the world map no choice with that one until I learn to create a blog that allows the same type of concept. Thanks for your feedback and I don't mind the harsh remarks as it helps me to grow.

Your first website, isnt online.
As for your second link.. get rid of the flashing text, its really annoying.
Create a much cleaner logo (or get a friend to do one for you)
That radio you have, just looks plain ugly. If you want a mp3 player on your website, just use like a graphic iPod, or another brand mp3 player.

Over all, as soon as i saw your site, i didnt want to go any where.

To improve over all, follow my suggestions:
Expand your website to the entire flash, you want to welcome your visitors.. not disgust them..
Place your navigation links on the top, or on the left hand side of the browser.

Im sorry to be so mean, but we have to work together to make the internet a somewhat better looking place

:p

The site is up now for http://azswindoe.com.

I am not offended by your comments and why I keep coming back. I am new to a lot of this stuff and want to make the internet better myself. I will make the changes that you suggested and see how they come up. Thanks for the feedback for DJRome's site and looking forward to the comments about swindoe's.

regarding http://djrome.mattsdesigns.biz
finally a site design that makes my work look fan-f@kkin-tastik!!! It's nice when someone comes along and throws off the curve between stellar and "why'djya bother".
thanx again for makin' me look so good...!!!!!!!!!

regarding http://azswindoe.com
I kinda like that... not into the rap / gangsta / dj vibe but i do like the work

Rock On my brothas...

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