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this site is my second project on flash website
www.lemgoldbond.com
what should i change? or what should i do to make it look more proffesional?
should i stick with this template?
or where should i put my menu, content
:)
comment and suggestion is more than welcome
thanks in advance
:D
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sorry
i was updating it :D
looks nice. you need to embed your fonts though. I get 8 px times new roman....can't read it too well ;)
i like the graphics
Other then the font it is really clean and neat.
yeah.. i noticed bout the fonts, in my computer they look fine but when i try to look it at other computers they look like time news roman....
how do we actualy make them stay look good? i use dynamic fonts (04B_08)
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fonts are spoiling your website try other fonts and make them visible
i can't red it mang.
i would also suggest you give some use to orangy nice graphic - or have a more noticeable animation rather than the spinning circles .
i can't read the fonts at all, and when i've zoomed in, i spotted out that the content to the left (grey box) is cut in half.
fix that and show us some content!:)
Fonts blaa blaa, everyone has said it already.
I def think that you should do something more with orange bit. I think maybe incorporate the mouse follower into that section and have some strange trippy effects when you move the mouse up and down. Or you could have this bit changing colour when in different sections of the site. It could be like images that scroll up and down within the area where the orange is now when an option is selected.
The center menu bit could be made more narrow so as to give a larger area for the content. This is dependent though on what sort of content you will be showing, (as for how much space it needs).
If you put the site within a frame set then you will be able to completly get rid of the scroll bar, (not just have it shaded out). Also this will mean that your flash movie could go all the way to the top and bottom of the screen. Meaning that you will not get that white "boader" at the top and bottom.
Might be nice if the circles in the orange bit did something like returning you to the home page when clicked. Just to give it some sort of function as well.
Good start though, nice feel.
thnx alot for the feedback guys:D
i m wondering that y in others computer except mine, the fonts became times new roman...
i was actualy using a pixel fonts...
i set it to dynamic(maybe this is the problem)
but if i set it to static the fonts will become blurred out...
any other way to do it?:confused:
use better font, but is on its way to excellent!
Can you show us what you mean with the problem with static fonts. I have never had any trouble with them so...
:confused:
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i already updated it to pixels fonts (static)
and now it wont show timenewsroman anymore
instead it will show us a pixel font
but the "b" on about us is actualy blurred
and i alredy make sure that i have em in right cordinates
ie: 127,23 not 127.4,23.1
why its blurred:confused:
i already try everything but they still wont working
:(
help would be more than welcome to:D
ok I see what you mean about the static font 'B' being a little blured. I think though that it looks loads better with the static font than the dynamic one even with the blurred 'B'.
I like the circles now as the mouse follower, but I think that I would remove the orange bars that move up and down. I think less is more here as it will match the 'fairly minimal' look shown in the rest of the design.
I like the way that the content will be shown. I'm a big fan of the scripted scroller thing. I have used this effect in my own site, but with the menu.
Nice one dude, I like the site so far and I will keep looking back here for more updates.
;)
Hmmm...its good, but the only thing i would change would be that little ([+]) Target like thing that follows the mouse. When i move it over the menu i cant read the other options