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Site is...
http://tim.digitalatmosphere.net
it's my resume, And I'm wanting critics opinions about the site.... I've checked it with most browsers, it seems to be ok, it's a little sluggish in mozilla (running a 550mhz AMD -[yes that's my computer]), how does it look to you.
There is no sound currently, but i'm not really finished with the site... that's why i need some opinions.
Nice work!
I'm looking for critical feedback so that I can make this site better,
is anything bothersome, are the colors ok, ect???
fonts are too dim and blurry
Where could i find a better font to use, i'm currently just using
verdana i think...
also should i make the fonts darker?
for the fonts try www.fontsforflash.com
about the rest, it's a good work but i think that with a little more work you could ease up the photos so that they don't look so choppy. but it's a nice start, keep it up;)
Thanks for the link, i've been playing with the free fonts, and the difference between the these fonts and other true type fonts is amazing...
when you say the photos are choppy, are you talking about the backgrounds that fade in, are they not fading in???
or are they fading in too fast???
great, i'm glad that those fonts helped, if you have any problem with them check the FAQ's at the same site, they really help, explaining everything.
about the photos, i guess it's the edges you might need to crop them better or check the export settings.
Ok the site is actually pretty nice, needs sounds, but visually i like it a great deal... I think the fonts in the different sections are fine, and you might have already fixed those, but the fonts in the little bubble thing... well i don't really like it... the look bulky especially for the size of your site... Very small site, that would be my only other critic is that the site maybe too small, it doesn't look like you can expand any....
other than the font in the (bubbly) I'd say the site is ver nice and original... Needs sounds... something mellow
Also i'll sell you a new computer.... cheap.
come on (550mhz.... ) :D
Thanks for the offer but.... :rolleyes:
I actually haven't had a chance to change the fonts yet... were they blurry to you??? maybe i should put something besides the page title in the bubbles... i'll see
[[I've already posted this once, but it was an accident]]
THe fonts on the sections looks fine to me, but the fonts in the (titles) is what looks funky....
just change those, i personally think that the other font is fine.
The font is not that bad, I would have preferred you to be more creative and spend the fourteen bucks on one of the better fonts from FFF. I agree that the title font sucks
Site design overall is nice. I think you could maybe add sound to buttons etc and also make the scroll bars work by just requiring the user to press and hold to scroll instead of having to keep clicking.
Daniel
I didn't mean to be so harsh, i noticed you haven't posted anything back about your site... and it doesn't look like anything has changed... I found some sounds that i thought would go nicely with the site... I'll post the link when i can remember where it is... smooth music bouncy navigation...
I like the site. Although i personally think that everything is really small. There is an abundance of white space. You could benefit from making the main frame a lot bigger, ie-500px by 600px. That will make it easier on the eye and will bring out more detail in your graphics. Right now things look a little blurry, which might translate into people thinking your work is "blurry"
Very nice design though... I like what you've done with the iMAC monitor!!
i thought it was nice small, Kind of lonely in the middle of the large white screen, i thought it kind of drew you into the middle, no searching for anything... its all right there...
but yeah it is kind of small.
I don't really see the blurry... If someone could list the blurry images from the site i will fix them... Unless it's the whole thing... which would mean that I just design "blurry"..
ok i put a loop on my site.... Please check the loop and check the sound off button.... sometimes when i click the sound on/off some of my navigation buttons disappear.
has anyone ever had this happen... if so why does it happen and why does it only happen on occasion.
really like the sound.
your interface is also a cool idea,
it has an overall design that is pleasing and smooth...
but i do agree with xt about the size,
i would also love to see your artwork when you get that up there!
nice work!
josh:mrpimp:
Hey thanks, but did you have a problem with the sound on/off button messing with the navigation.