amanjivraj.com

Hey, I jus completed my site so check it out.
http://www.amanjivraj.com
Please give me some feedback on the html and flash version
Thanks


Aman Jivraj
aman@amanjivraj.com

http://www.amanjivraj.com

it is ok, there are a few cool graphics, but I definately think you should speed it up. How many frames/sec do you have it on

hey stylebandit
right now i have it at 12 fps.. what do you think i should do?

thanks

fps >40
for the rest, good look!

Hey guys
Thanks for the advice.
I sped it up a bit, is it any better??
aslo, there must be some more things i can change,
please give some more advice
thanks
aman

http://www.amanjivraj.com

cant see a flash page, says unavailable with your logo on the page.

:(

hey guys,

thanks eightamrock for lettin me know bout that.
fixed that up right away, so please take a look at the site now, it'll work now,

please let me know if you guys have any suggestions or comments on the html and flash portion of the site

thanks alot
i will reciprocate reviews

aman

aman@amanjivraj.com

http://www.amanjivraj.com

I have checked it out now that i was able to view it and have to following comments.

Its is layed out very nice. The use of elements and geometry are key in its design. Especially the portfolio section. I do feel it runs a tad slow however as the previous posts have said. Speed it up a little i would say at least 30 fps to smooth out the rough edges. If you are still having a problem past that then you need to actionscript your motion tweens. Otherwise It looks good nice use of color and fonts as well.

Nice

I liked the colors and the background images! Nice 3D graphics.
The geometry was good too. One page felt a little off balance because you had a lot of text in the right area and it went a little close to the edge (might fall off). Just made the page seem a tad uneasy. I like the menu slider.
Good job

hey guys,
thanks alot for the suggestions, i will b sure to take a look at it.

roxannej7, i was wondering what you meant, which page are you talking about? please let m know so i can fix it up

thanks

keep the comments comin

aman

http://www.amanjivraj.com

Words go to close the boundary on the home page. I think the rhs should come in a little.

who is your webhost?
i am here in southern california on a several mbps cable connection and it takes an unusually long time for what seems to be a very small download on the site and each of the sections.

one more thing. your background image repeats itself when you scroll down. looks a little funny. other than that great work!

Hey guys,
thanks for the comments

roxannej7, i now know what you meant, so I fixed it, please check and make sure i understood you right.

bfly03, last night i was playing with the background, and i dint get a chance to finish before i went to sleep, so it was just a mistake, i fixed it up in the mornin, so take a look, it shouldnt repeat any more

keep the comments comin
thanks

Aman

http://www.amanjivraj.com

Yes, that did it for me. Much better.

hey guys,

I made a few changes, and fixed up an error on the html page, be sure to check it all out.

keep the comments coming
thanks

aman

http://www.amanjivraj.com

That looks better, I'm not sure exactly what you changed, but it seems much smoother and easier to read.

Very Good!

Hey

Thanks Roxannej7, I'm glad you like what i fixed.

keep the comments coming
Aman

for as much as style as the static images have, (excluding the splash page, didnt feel that one much) the flash isnt as complimentary as it could be! now, im not dogging what youve done.. its nice but it could just be nicer.. i do like the border image behind the info boxes.. thats pretty cool. as far as the header image.. (tentacles) well, kinda seen it before u know? interesting choice of texture as well... the background pattern is def different. lol

Hey Guys

Thanks for the comments
I dint exactly guess what you want me to do here, but as for the header i will soon be redoing the flash site, so please keep the comments coming so i have idea of what to fix on it
Thanks alot

Aman
http://www.amanjivraj.com