What Dya Think???

Just a ruff layout. What can i do to make it better??

also why does the shadow on the door flicker so much?? what can I do to correct this.

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a few things. first, I don't see the flicker your talking about. also, I would suggest you change your scroll arrows to a scroll bar, or something faster than what you have. I don't want to read your text bad enought to wait for it to scroll, and the average user wont' either. As far as your layout, try to tighten up your shadows and glows, look at the things on your desk, around your computer, and look at the shadows they cast, then look at the shadows on your design. also, it seems your highlights and shadows are inconsistent with each other. don't know if youcare about that sort of thing, just thought IO would point it out.

good start, keep at it

It's definetly a good structure, I like the transition, the only thing that bothers me is the overuse of bevels !Make it more crisp...
just my opinion !

The scroll moves way too slow as well. Maybe try putting a conventional scrollbar on the right side with a slider bar so that people can scroll at their own pace. I would do something with the coloring to make things stand out a bit more... Such as the Pizza Rolls title at the top left corner.... Everything sort of blends together.


Have a good starting point. With a little work it will be pretty cool.



Regards,



LP

Thanks for your comments guys/girls I am working on your sugestions now.