motion-stream.net

hi there, need some feedback on my page ,., it's not totally finished but in a couple of days and after i got your suggestions i hope to lauch´the final version. URLs www.motion-stream.de www.motion-stream.net

Thanks :D

I think it looks really good,
but there are 3 things that captured my eye:
1. doted bg. [my gf] dots are soo last week [/my gf] :D I would go with something solid, that pattern is a bit distractive.
2. fonts. I would try something simple (Tahoma for example, that would emphasize the "spacish" atmosphere :) ).
3. I would also reconsider the form of the buttons. If you went futuristic style then keep it up, think of some interesting form (or at least round the corners).

keep it up and good luck!

thanks alot will try to chage the fonts and those buttons,. in the beginning i was trying to keep the button as simple as possible,., but more and more ppl are telling me that they dont really fit the concept ,.,., the dots in the background ,., hm,., well,. you think i should use another pattern or no pattern at all??? how about loading time?? was you already bored to watsch the loading screen or was it alrigthy??? hope i have time to change the parts you where talking about tonite,., thanks again ,., more need more suggestions ,.,

sorry for my spelling ,., i'm german :D

you've got a nice frame around the content area (dots). i think it would be really nice if you had something like that, probably smaller though, around the picture in the background. right now you've got a really cool image that has a good sense of 3D, but looks flat on the page because it sits on a solid black background. so i think if you frame it out a bit, give it a sense of depth, it'll really seem like a separate element that jumps off the page, not just sits flat on it.

nicht schlecht :)

Little later than promised but, i finally did some changes,.,.
First dots on the screen are gone ,., improved the speed of the page pretty much ;) and it looks much better i think...
Second no border anymore,., i like it alot what do you guys think??
Third news and current projcts are hostet now ,.,
Tomorow i'll try to add some sound to it so things will become even sweeter as they are so far ,., thanks for the good tips ,., if any of you out there have more ideas,., please help me out ,.,, sofar it had all been pretty usefull.,.

cheers,.,.,

i think it looks good...BUT i'd never recommend anyone to have their flash movie scale to fit the browser window, unless it was strictly vector art. since your swf stretches to fit my slightly larger than average 1600 x 1200 screen, your images become pixelated, and animations more choppy. but when i resize the window to about a third of that size, it looks great.

also, why does your site pop up in a new window from your splash page? that seems unnecessary, and with pop up blockers being the way they are, you might lose a few visitors who can't see it.

ok,., i'll get it done tomorrow in the morning ,., first thing on my to do list :D ,., thanks for the help again ,.,

Good use of motion however I think there is too much animation before you get to the site. That color blue isn't really doing anything for me either, I'd use a color less obtrusive. It doesn't match the gray.

Otherwise, this is a good site. The 3d images are nice and so is the background image. You did a good job of branding your logo too.

I really gotta say it again thanks for the support...
...rite now i hosted a new version of the site,.,
1. new BG, corners fade to black and pic has glow effects now
2. Sound is added (well parts of it, the other stuff gets hostet tomorrow , but you'll get the idea)
3. Audio player, it doesnt have any stuff to play jet but i hope i'll get some sound that fits in .,., (how you guys like the flames???)
these are the biggest changes for today so far,.,now i gotta eat something,., totally forgott about that,., :doughnut:

it's looking good, better and better every day. i think the corners fading to black is a really nice touch!

Hi there,., just added some stuff on my page ,., under specials now finally is something,. any suggestions to the page at all??? was pretty much not able to do somthing on it in the past view days ,., sorry about that ,. but now i guess ,. the next weeks are planed for the site again,., :D

You guys have a lot of tallent thats for sure but I cant lie too you, a lot of it just doesnt look good especially that splash screen its ugly and noobish. You 3d designs are pretty cool but your site doesnt show it. The fonts are ugly and the metal shading on the interface console looks bad. The way its layed out isnt exactly atractive either, I really think this looks like your guys are rushing the process way too much. You can do better a lot better so go at it take you time and really put some thought into it. Just because your using 3d and flash doesnt mean people are going to go gaga... Please dont take this the wrong way I think some of your work is pretty cool and shows a lot of promis but this isnt doing it.