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Hi everyone...
I'd love to get your feedback on a great site I just posted for a band in Georgia named Red House. The site contains some actionscript for an e-mail autoresponder and a newsletter sign-up, among other things. If anyone would like to obtain a tutorial, please let me know.
http://www.redhouseontheweb.com
Thanks!
Red House
that looks great. i would like a tutorial how to do that. did you do all the animation (like the people in the beginning)?
Moved from the Flash CS3/AS3 Forum to the more appropriate Member Sites Forum.
Please don't post such items that could be considered self-promotion like this again at Flashkit. You're allowed one post in such a forum: Member Sites, Site Check... et al. But since you've requested feedback, this is the area for such a thing.
Please take a moment to get yourself acquainted to the Flashkit FAQ/Rules as it covers such items. And also, please don't duplicate post this... that's against the rules.
Good luck and that's quite a good looking site :cap:
Can't really tell if it's great ActionScript or not, I can't see the source cod... but if you ask me, all that can be done in a few steps with not so great ActionScript... maybe post some code or something...
Thanks Gerbick...
My intentions are purely genuine regarding feedback and I'm certainly willing to share expertise and ideas for people looking to accomplish similar results.
As far as Plenary...perhaps you could post a link or two to some of your own work?
Hmm, can you make flame making tutorial, your flame looks greath.
I think it's amazing! great job! I would like to know how long it took you to do it. I'm just starting in AS3 and curious about how much time it would take to do such a great site.
Nice stuff, I get what PlenaryCreation is talking about though, can't really see anything that would be actionscript intensive. Still a very smooth site. The animations in the header are well done, nice navigation, crisp text. Do you have a portfolio site we can view?
Nice animation on the site! But...Great Actionscript? Unless you're dynamically masking and creating those animations, I don't see any great actionscript (judging by loading time). A mail form and mail list is not "Great actionscript." Despite the fact that the actionscript is not advanced, the site still looks pretty good. Keep up the good work.
Good luck on the site,
Sportzguy933
yeah baby, that rocks :) Love the flames and total admosphere :P
Good job!
Don't be a baby, take the critiques like a man !Quote:
Originally Posted by Red House Band
Btw, I don't think I was the one asking for a critique, if you can't take it, don't ask for it.
You can tell you really put some serious time and effort into the site by the details that you have in your navigation, and your effort in sticking to a theme and feel throughout the site. I wanted to tell you, however (and I doubt many people will notice) that what you go to the "About" section, the fire next to about gets lit near the top, as it should,. Then when you click the link within the about that sais "see more pictures" the gallery section appears. Then if you go back to the top and navigate that way, say "news" or somthing, it moves to the news section and both the news and about fire stay lit.
I know it's a nit picky minor bug, but as a fellow flasher and by the level of the work, I thought you would care.
We'd be grateful if you'd call us flash developer instead. :angel:Quote:
Originally Posted by rynoe
Red House Band >> Nice site by the way. Flashy, showy, fru-fru (Anyone watched Happy Feet? No? Nvm then...). And yes, spiffy flames, appearing and disappearing everywhere. Keep it up.